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November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
holey crap! this is an AWESOME AWESOME STORY! What you've got going on in this is one of the best I've read in a long time! Thank YOU for sharing this! I can't wait to read what happens next! till next time!
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Riveting tale! El is a fantastic character, and the children spirits are endearing. (Hope little Jack is all right.) It seems that we have a psychic killer! Such a twist. Hopefully D. Prince will see the error of his theory before the killer can do more damage.
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! I wonder what was in that folder. Seems like Michael has a little ghostly helper.
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October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Woah awesome twist at the end of the chapter! I guess this means the killer is also paranormal. Poor jack! I liked his ghost
Great update!
Great update!
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October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've been keeping up with this story since the prologue and I can honestly say I adore it. I look forward to every update and I love the way you chose to build the story. In that you solve the big mystery through solving others. I feel very involved while reading and hope that you continue to update. Early updates are always welcome too~ ;)
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October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this. I absolutely cannot wait for more. I'm hoping for an update soon~
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September 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. It begins with a punch of action that is well choreographed and definitely leaves me intrigued as to what will happen in the next instalment. My only issue, really, is there were a few typos, and that's a pretty small issue. Your writing skill is good, and you have a talent for making the narrative relatable. I look forward to seeing more.
~Chloe
~Chloe
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September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I must say that was a very good start and I would love to read more.