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Holy shit! It cant be done! What the fuck am I supposed to read every night? Pleeeeeeeeeeease you have to start part 2... like NOW! This is one of those stories that just really gets in your head. You gotta bring it bacbk to me:)

I didn't think the mating would happen and then it did, and then she went unresponsive. Ooh. Every group looks to be after the other one now, it's going to be like a battle royal. I can't wait :)

Whewwwwwww! That was fucking intense! Im so happy that Kiernan got his Lillith back! I was a little saddened to see Mira die...I mean we have to admit that her crazy ass did add a certain flare and fucked up humor to the story sometimes! I cant wait for Dmitri to catch up to Edward and Julian...oh my god...when Julian finds out that he drank her dry...he is gonna snap! Even more than he already has! And as much as she pissed off Edward...its still his sister that he is sworn to protect. Buuut Dmitri will try to lie and say that Kiernan drank her dry im sure...but they can smell Mira in his veins if he tries that shit! Also im excited to see what happens with all the "rejects" in the basement! Surely they can be put to good use...but they probably want to kill Dmitri after the way he has treated them! There's just soooooo many possibilities...and I havent even gotten started on Kiernan and Lillith yet! Ahhhhhh! I cant wait for an update! I hope she isnt too scared of him now that she knows the truth about what he is for sure. Please update soon!

Hoooolllly fuck! New shit has come to light! I cant wait for an update! Im gonna go insane waiting! Man your good!

My goodness...this story just gets better and better! The detail and the way you write...you are just amazing. You are very talented! And I CANNOT wait for an update! Kiernan is gonna whip some asses! And The Family? They are so fucked up! I love how twisted and perverse they are! So please keep up the amazing work and thank you again for sharing your talent with us :)

Now the story is getting sad. I wonder if they know that Lilith looks like Syeria. I kind of wonder if they even really care. But poor Lilith :(

Holy shit...this is one of my top 3 favorite stories I have read on this site. Any site for that matter. This could be a fucking movie. It is so detailed and clever and not just smut...dont get me wrong...I like smut. But this? This is something else. Its amazing. Just absolutely amazing. I cant wait for you to update...and im terrified one day you just wont. So you gotta follow this one through to the very end or I will never know what is going to happen to Kiernan and his Lillith...I have to know! And holy shit on the whole back story of Kiernans past with his vampire bride! I couldnt believe how her own family mutilated her! Totally unexpected. So pleeeeeease keep up the amazing work and thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us :)

I was hoping for more of Lilith, but a blast into Kieran's past was also nice. It seems like just as they got together they're about to be taken away, and by her family. It seems like he's about to lose everything he ever loved/cared for pretty soon because of this little town outing.

I like how you explain how she felt when she entered the tavern and dealt with her senses overload, it was a nice touch that made the process seem a little more real. It was also nice that you kind of showed the curse portion with them always wanting to drink to kill.

Once again, lovely writing and great job on the speedy upload :) I guess the chapters will be slowing down and maybe getting a bit lengthier. That's always fine in my book, as long as the updates keep on coming!

Here's hoping that chapter 15 comes out just as fast as the other ones with the cliffhanger you left. I will say, though, I did not see those other vampires coming!

The update happened so fast I didn't have time to actually respond to the last chapter D; I have happy tears.

It seems like everything is building up for a big scare/confrontation, and I like that, so far. The friends are in danger and right now, no one knows! I surely didn't expect that the guy that finally got to dance with her was also a hunter. I also like their reactions, so far. Kieran with his want/need to hurt people, but at the same time he doesn't really want to hurt Lilith.

The next chapter I was even more blown away since it was so fast, but, alas, it was also shorter. The hunters are really trying to get him to come out and they look like they are trying to make him angry. So he has no home, he's being hunted very hard, and he's about to meet Lilith for coffee. It's like two cliffies in one :3