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Hello JMBramblings! I've read your story since the first chapter so I was happy that you updated this story! Although I understand why Elna is mad I feel that it might just be a little over the top with her complete disgust. I feel like because Sebastian is obviously wealthy and powerful that it shouldn't come as that big of a surprise that he knew confidential information about her like her financial situation. For the last chapter I actually half expected him to somehow have a hand in her not able to get a job so that forces her to act desperate and just say yes to the contract. Also, the fact that her very own friends whom she seems so close with can't decipher her morbid fear and aversion to him is a bit odd especially because she barely said anything to them and just letting Sebastian do all the talking... I guess it shows how charismatic he is though it just makes me wonder if Elna has her friends really have all that deep of a friendship if they can't sense her blatant emotions. Other than that though the Elna is being so hard to get that it does make the story interesting especially since Sebastian seems like the type who can just get whomever he wants. However, I hope she'll cool off a bit and sit down and actually think about her situation since everything seems to be going super speed from interview to somehow marriage haha. I can't wait for your next chapter and don't let random trollers get you down.

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Awesome story! Looking forward to the rest :)