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November 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can see the love interest growing between both of them. I believe that they are falling for each other but are to stubborn to relise that they are both having feelings for each other. Like I stated before, it would be really funny if they really fall in love wit h each other before the contract is up. Would really love to see that happen.
But only you as the writer of this great story knows which way they are headed. Will be awair t ing the next chapters of this great story.
But only you as the writer of this great story knows which way they are headed. Will be awair t ing the next chapters of this great story.
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November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It usually takes a lot for me to get really excited to see a new update for a story. The last time I was this excited to spy an update was when the story Bound/Summon was being updated. Your story is truly amazing and I love your writing. I love the characters and the sass that goes on between them. Keep doing what you are doing! I will always enjoy each and every chapter you write up.
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November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Like I said before great writing. Love the story and I stated before that it would not surprise me to see them really fall in love with each other before the contract is up. Would really love to see them do that. I think it would be the best thing for both of them.
Keep up the great work. Will be looking forward to the next chapters of this story.1073
Keep up the great work. Will be looking forward to the next chapters of this story.1073
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November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Loved the way that she was able to tell her story go her friends and the way Sebastian was told by Selinda what would happen to him if he hurt Elima and he stated that he never wanted to get on her bad side. I still say that the way they are going that they will fall in love by the time the contract is over. But only you as the writer knows how this story is going to proceed.
Keep up the good writing and will be awaiting the next chapter.
Keep up the good writing and will be awaiting the next chapter.
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October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter. Neat how you used your name in the story as the widow of the former CEO. Like I said before that by the end of the contract they will fall in love for real. He is already having feelings for her and she is having feelings for her. Keep the love coming between the two of them. Will be waiting for more chapters.
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October 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and actually just created an account so I can review it. I love how you are able to make Elna a full, complex person and I'm hoping that we'll get to see more of Sebastian too. Can't wait for the next update!
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October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good chapters. I am beginning to believe that if the story continues in the direction that you are going that by the end of the two year contract that they will fell in love for real. Keep up the good work. Will be waiting for the next chapter.2
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October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story for the first time and then looked at the reviews and wanted to let the author (JMBramblings) and BronxWench (AFF Archive Moderator) know that it wasn't me leaving those anonymous reviews on 09/23/14. I do leave reviews under various stories I follow here without signing in (because I am too lazy) using the name snowleopard and think this happened with another story I follow on AFF not too long ago. By the way, I really like your story and thanks for sharing it here with us!
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October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Elna is an idiot.
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September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I do not believe that you took this from someone else as I have been reading most story sites since the late 1990's and was even a manager of one and never saw this story on any site. If the one who is stating you stole this story is telling the truth then tell us what site it is on and when it was written and by who. Other than that keep up the good work and I am looking for the next chapter in this story. Also let me know what else you have written so that I can read more of writing.