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for Dragon King

by Tahn

person Nbsiren
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lite and Shade make me giggle, good job on them :P
person staar
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG it get's better and better with each chapter ...thanks and see you soon !!!!!
person snowleopard
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I check here first thing every morning so I can read the next chapter you post!

Oh, thank your buddy Jules for me for coming up with the idea of the tiny dragons! Such a great idea! So, I am figuring they appear because of the baby forest dragons and are their protectors/guardians/friends of some sort. I really think Marcus the amethyst dragon is so neat. I don't think Blaine's bedroom is going to be big enough if any more dragons join their nest, lol, they will have to expand it to make room.

So, I bet this guy the tiny dragons attacked was the one who watched Blaine the day he rescued Luther.

I am worried about the next few chapters because you said they will be dark! I just hope our dragons don't die or anything bad happens to them.

I am so excited there is a sequel in the future!

Oh no, a cliffhanger!
person rukia isaioi
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well thank u kindly for the answer!!! As for what i thot of this chap, wow!!! I can't wait 2 c wat happens next!!! Poor bedevild jaime! I gotta wonder if the lil dragons r ghosts 2 small 4 luther 2 sence. But then again. How could they hurt an assassin??? Im lookin 4ward 2 figuring them out. Ur makin me slowly obsesst w this story!!! Keep up the AMAZING work!!!

Rukia
person Nbsiren
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
mmmm plot...enough for baby dragons to sink their teeth into :P
person snowleopard
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Luther is an amazing dragon and I loved learning more about him being the guardian of death. It's so very interesting! I felt so sad for the Forest Dragon but am happy Luther got to her in time and saved her babies. I hope they adopt the orphaned babies and then Jaime can be their new 'mommy', and Blaine and Luther the daddies! They are so cute!

Please consider putting up some art work of them both in human and dragon form, please. That would be so cool!



person rukia isaioi
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol, the bedroom is getting a lil crowded!!! Will u b doing time skips or go thru the hole aray of dragon colors??? That being said could u explain how many ther r &if wether or not ther r any the same color, just different shades??? Ie, fire, lava, & ruby red; forest, jade, & emerald green; or ocean, sky, & sapphire blu. . . Update soon plz??? Lovin this story so far!!!

Rukia
person staar
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice I wonder how saw them !!!! can't wait for more !!!! thanks for the update and see you soon :)
person Nbsiren
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
awwww baby dragons :)
person Girlygirl
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I really like it. So it's a threesome with children. Cute. So Jamie and the babies have the two most powerful dragons on the planet to protect them, right? Who was watching when the King freed Luther? Was it a hunter? I hope not. But I'll wait and see where you're headed with this plot. Thanks for writing.