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Chapters Four and Five Very mysterious! But I do love the little baby dragons - they're so cute :) So the King will save the amethysts from extinction too? Seems like this King came along just in time.

Chapter Six Not confusing at all! It worked wonderfully. I like these two new dragons - they're awesome, and many things have become clearer now.

Chapters Seven and Eight Shade and Lite made me giggle, tormenting Blaine - they are so cute. Beautiful image of Amethyst dragon, so lovely. Also, I wondered how long it would take them to realise it was Shaun. I wonder what the matter with Jaime... *reads on*

Wow... this story is amazing! I meant to keep reviewing every chapter or so, but then I just couldn't stop reading to the end. I was so worried for them all! I still wish the ice dragon didn't die. I'm so glad the evil mage is gone, and that Marcus got to say goodbye to his family; it's been a lonely time for him, waiting for that peace. And btw, all the babies made me smile like a lunatic here at my desk. Your story really made me feel good in my soul... thank you so much for writing and sharing. I've got a million and one things to do, but I do not care... I love this universe you've made, and I'm going to go and look at the next story right now! :)

I'm so glad I came back to re-read this. It's delightful. Xoxo Robin

ch 9 Oh goodness gracious...poor Jaime almost got all his magic sucked out. Thank goodness for Marcus. ch 10 'Jaime slept for five days. During all of that time he was never alone, one of his nest mates was always watching over him.' -HA HA HA! Darn straight! Never take your eyes of him for a MINUTE. 'he mage brought his face closer and as the light began to float up, it was ripped from the air and pulled into his black eyes. Luther could feel the soul screaming as it was captured, and watched in horror as the hunters dropped the body, which turned to ash as it hit the floor.' - Nope. Not creepy at all...just terrifying! ch 11 Man, they almost lost Marcus there!

ch 12 OH ho ho ho! Luther can grab at the souls now! Yay~ See, it was a good thing you finally let Blaine mark you! Aww! Go twins! They're kicking major butt out there. "Baby golds are being born across the world." - Wait, they're not ALL gold, right? Oh wait...the golds were the first, duh! ch 13 'One group of dragons had not moved during the event, and when they were the only ones left they drifted forwards. Luther nudged Marcus who looked up and saw his family shining with purple light.' - *gushing tears* I'm not crying...nope. "Isn't it a little early for them to have human forms?" whispered Marcus. "With the three of you broadcasting so much magic, how could they not have absorbed some of it themselves?" Jaime whispered. Shade and Lite were practically vibrating with excitement, wishing they would wake up soon so they could play. - Ha ha ha! Easy with the babies, twinsies. ' It was the first time since he came into being that he was mating for a reason other than duty, and it was a freeing experience.' -Hee hee, get it, Blaine~! ch 14 They watched in shock as their baby dragon shifted into a baby human with black hair, and the same gold eyes. He giggled in Jaime's arms and held on to Blaine's finger, bringing it to his mouth to slobber on, and they knew his name. Damien. - *more gushing tears* I'm not crying!! *sniffle* Not one bit!! Jeez, I just finished reading it all. I feel sad about it, but at the same time, I know there's MORE stories to read! Yay! I'm definitely going to revisit this one in the future for a re-read or two, I really really really enjoyed it. Love dragon stories. And this was was wonderfully done. I love the different color clans, the fact that some are born of gems and ores and fade into crystals...I loved it!

Chapter One - What a lovely beginning! I adore the idea of gold dragons having come into existence from gold hoards, and therefore the need to be petted and treasured... nice touch :)

Chapter Two: Oh, poor Jaime! I just want to cuddle his little socks off. I hope he continues to get happier. You're not about to do anything evil to him... are you? *gulps*

Chapter Three: Getting worried about Blaine now being really tired. Hope he's going to be okay.