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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
@attackegg
Wow. WOW. Thank you so much for that! Good lord, what a typo. YES, I indeed meant PAST their second decade of life. Oh my goodness. I have changed this now on every place I posted and published this story. Thank you again! I really owe you one for that catch.
Wow. WOW. Thank you so much for that! Good lord, what a typo. YES, I indeed meant PAST their second decade of life. Oh my goodness. I have changed this now on every place I posted and published this story. Thank you again! I really owe you one for that catch.
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October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was very, very entertaining; both sexy and amusing, and I liked Seth for his unwavering cockiness and teasing. I liked it.
That is, I liked it operating under the assumption that you either meant to write 'fresh OUT OF their second decade' or else, fresh into their twenties, because otherwise they are what, eleven, and Seth maybe thirteen? And in that case you really need to warn for child porn in your story tags.
But yeah assuming I'm not looking at underage porn I really liked the dynamic between your main characters. That was fun.
That is, I liked it operating under the assumption that you either meant to write 'fresh OUT OF their second decade' or else, fresh into their twenties, because otherwise they are what, eleven, and Seth maybe thirteen? And in that case you really need to warn for child porn in your story tags.
But yeah assuming I'm not looking at underage porn I really liked the dynamic between your main characters. That was fun.
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It was great!!! Will Ou please continue this ?
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Extremely hot and relentless. Liked the little twist at the end about Seth. I know you said this was a oneshot, but another story with these two, or even just Seth and more of his adventures would be amazing.
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great writing! very descriptive but to the point *___*