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for The Forest

by SayokoHime

person Reeciez
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I guess if I had to say which I liked best it would be Lorcan but I'd be content with Elian too, even if it looks too close to alien.
I like this so far. Mysterious, curious and soon to be very dramatic. I am very much looking forward to another chapter.
person Moku_Sui
schedule September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
If he's supposed to be a good guy, then no Lorcan please. He was the evil guy I hated in another story Blood Red...
person alphaman
schedule September 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, think I could get into this. Oh and the name Lorcan seems appropriate for him.
person sess'sbewitchinBabe
schedule September 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is interesting so far. I can't wait to read more. I like the name Brysen.
person snowleopard
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the first chapter. I am curious to learn how Quinn arrived in this strange forest and who the mysterious Falcon man is. Update soon!
person rukia isaioi
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Totally cool. I like the second name best but that's just me. I can't wait 4 the reveal of the sifi or fantasy twist. As 4 a goal I'll b happy w anything that's not tragic or a complete hanger. Well. . . . Almost anything lol. Plz keep it up, i like ur writin style, detailed without bein boring, something most writers can't balance well. Update soon??? :)


fondly, rukia.
person WinterRose
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Elian
person snowleopard
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to vote! I vote for the name Lorcan!

person zas
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great start keep up the wonderful job, if u are look for some to re-read before u update hit me up.
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start! I like it so far.