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for The Forest

by SayokoHime

person rukia isaoi
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was cool!!! I can only imagin the blush on quinns face thinkin bak on the lady naked. Lol. And now im SO excited 2 find out who his future match will b(glad it ain't quil, he sounds like an uke). And thank u 4 the info on the other story, i will look n2 it if it seems cool. Can't wait 4 nxt update. I hope it shows weather wings r a dominant feature n this world or if it's a mixt populace. . .
person Moku_Sui
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the recommendation! I like where this story is going. I'm already kind of hoping it'll be Quinn and Quil haha
person zas
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the up date u love how the story is going so far can't wait for the next chapter.
You welcome
person Semaya
schedule September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
There were a few grammatical issues (sorry, as an English major, grammar was beaten into me) but I really like the story so far and I'm excited to see what happens :)
person zas
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. My email is lynzera@hotmail.com
person Moku_Sui
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha, sorry to burst your bubble about the name, but I'm already liking how this story is going. I'm glad I have a story to look forward to now
person Mona Thompson
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I really like this story so far. I love how the people have wings! So cool! I think you are doing a great job on your own. And honestly I dont get upset if it has mistakes in the spelling or whatever...I mean this is a fan fiction site...so alot of people on here are just starting out ya know? So stop with all the apologizing. Your human. And I think you should write it how ever you like...its yours. So make it that in every way possible. I understand wanting to keep people happy buuuut again....its your story! And you have done great so far. So I cant wait till the next chapter and thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent and imagination with me!
person Mona Thompson
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Whoooooops! I forgot something...I know alot of people hate cliffhangers...they drive me crazy too but thats why they are so great! It gets your blood going! Also tragedies...I love a story that gets my emotions going. Like when your done reading it you didnt even realize you had been holding your breath until you have to take a deep breath in and let it all out because you were so on edge while you were reading it! And if stories can actually make me cry or laugh outloud...those are the good ones. When your done reading them you feel so worn out and emotional...it touches you in a way that you didnt even know was possible. So having said this...I hope that if your story takes a dark turn...I just hope you follow it...dont try to force a different direction. Just follow the natural path that your mind is taking you down and that doesnt mean its going to end that way...it just means that there are going to be ups and downs like every other amazing tale out there! I cant wait to read where your imagination takes me!
person rukia isaioi
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Thank u 4 the reply & Im glad we share the same opinions on tragedies & cliff hangers. :-) i wonder if more characters will b introduced next chapter, & it would help 2 no more of the backgrounds of every1 so theyr personalities r mor solidified. And is the fic u recomended an original or n a different category??? Thank u & plz update this cool story soon!!!

Rukia
person snowleopard
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is starting to get even more interesting and I love mysteries. I am excited to learn more about this strange new world that Quinn has found himself in.