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October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see this as more than a one-shot. It has a great story potential :)
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September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, although I was sad when it ended! Lol
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September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this and not leave it as a one-shot!
There is so much potential to this story. I wish Adams and Pender didn't just drive off leaving him there after the rape. It would be cool if they knew what they were doing but couldn't stop because they were under the influence of the curse. After the rape, maybe they could have felt guilty so try and help Caleb break the curse. I would love to know more about the demon who cursed Caleb and more about the curse itself.
They could help him get away from his stepfather too. He could go live with them and overtime they fall in love and stay together as a threesome. Maybe, Pender and Adams are already in a relationship too.
There is so much potential to this story. I wish Adams and Pender didn't just drive off leaving him there after the rape. It would be cool if they knew what they were doing but couldn't stop because they were under the influence of the curse. After the rape, maybe they could have felt guilty so try and help Caleb break the curse. I would love to know more about the demon who cursed Caleb and more about the curse itself.
They could help him get away from his stepfather too. He could go live with them and overtime they fall in love and stay together as a threesome. Maybe, Pender and Adams are already in a relationship too.