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August 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Waiting for more chapters.
Good story
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April 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I hope the next chapter comes out soon
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January 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A short chapter but interesting. looking forward to the next one.
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October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell I love this fucking story!!! So detailed and original...and I still think it would make one hell of a movie! Please update soon!
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October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Again another great chapter. Really your stry telling. Keep up the good work. Will be awaiting for future chapters to all your stories.
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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Again. Another good chapter. Really enjoyed and will be awaiting more chapters. Also awaiting the other chapters for Hero and Vengence. Again good story.
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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow...what can I say? This is one hell of a story. The detail is amazing, the story is breathtaking and this honestly would make an awesome movie! Please update soon and thank you for sharing your talent with us!
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September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Like I stated before the story is great. Only problem is that it seems to be getting shorther with each chapter. This one was only 2 paragrah long. Just got interested in reading the chapter and then it was finished. Need more body please.
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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
don't give up the story is good. remember "the jorney of 1000 miles starts with 1 step". if you have a story to tell it, tell it and if one person reads it or 1 million it's ok. don't worry though because I thank it will catch on boy word of mouth, this site is hard to navigate but people do talk.
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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story. keep the chapters coming. Found out about this story when I was on Magusfangs forum. Have read all his stories and am waiting for his next chapters to come out. Started reading his on the other site until they deleted him their site. Is there anyother stories that you have written. If so could your send me an email or leave me the name son Magusfangs site. Thanks