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for Trouble in Paradise

by MahouMakai

person Hatake
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far!

I would be most amused to read more of your story - I'm lying in my bed with tons of worms in my guts because of Levi and what he's going to do.

I hope you keep writting this story til the end
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more of this story and hope you decide to continue it.
person midnighteyes
schedule September 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. keep up the good work.
person snowleopard
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and can't wait until Lavi is introduced!
person xXx
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued and hope you update again real soon.
person Avernion
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So far, I'm really liking this story. :) It actually made me sad to reach the last chapter. Too bad I didn't stumble onto this sometime in the future when I could've read more at once, ha ha. I can't wait for the next chapter. :3
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please keep this story it is very interesting and different! I am falling in love with it. Please update soon! This should be continued and not dropped.
person Celestialuna
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
person Moku_Sui
schedule September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear....This Lavi guy....I'm concerned, buuuutttt, is that a budding romance I see? :D
person deedee
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You should continue this story. Its really good, and i would love to see how Lavi has changed.

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