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I read chapter 1-4 at once. Great characters! X3
I wanted so badly to like Lavi or at least not think so badly of him (lol) but OMIGOD he's a conceited douche bag. He chained his hubbie down and abandoned him. That's ridiculous, petty and selfish. But if I assume he was messed up after their first7 years of marriage by insecurities compounded with abuse of some substance...I could still give him a chance. After the incident he got counselling...and yet he never made the effort to apologise to the one person he wronged? If he thought what he did could never be forgiven, so why bother dredging up the past, I could understand that. But he actually wants his husband back...he's still selfish and petty. He refuses to sign divorce papers, but can't seem to get off his ass and go apologize, and say he's changed and serious about still being a part of his life again? Smh
I don't see how a man with a kid who deserves so much more will get back together with an abusive ex husband who hasn't really changed...at least not where it counts.
I look forward to reading the rest of this story and seeing the plot twist and thicken lol
Seriously though, thanks for uploading this :)

I'm really liking this story. I've actually teared up at more than one point while reading this and I'm really glad that the story is going to continue!

Yeah, we finally got to meet Lavi! I think he's still a jerk and needs to redeem himself in Jackson's eyes. Oh, Aleister is very interesting and I can't wait to learn more about him too. How could Lavi not have know Jackson wasn't still making mortgage payments and why didn't the bank notify one of them. If the loan was already paid off, the bank shouldn't have taken Lavi's money and he should be able to get it back!

I am so happy you updated this and will be continuing it!

That last line was so powerful. I'm really glad you decided to continue with this story. It's a really good one :)

A very good story! I think chapter 4 is not rushed at all. It flows perfectly. I can't wait to read more of this story, hopefully 'til the end. Great work!

Good chapter, I'm not sure if he's lying or he didn't know, I'm thinking it the new husbands. I really hope they are not evil.

I didn't know what to expect on this story but honestly I couldn't be happier that I took a chance in opening the tab for this story. It's had me so strongly drawn in since the first chapter, that I hate it's was only 3 chapters but I had been waiting for you to update and when you did I literally screamed... I really love this story and want to see were it will be going. Thanks for the awesome update. xD _ hazel

Great chapter! Please update!

I am really liking this story and happy you are continuing it! Update again soon!

Please do continue this story! I want to read more of it and very soon.