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Seriously alien planet! My open wound made was submerged in water with who knows what types of bacteria...ah I'll be fine! Now I'm practically dancing foot to foot in anticipation!

Ohhhhh I really like your writing style and the concept of the story, it very unique. Will be looking forward to updates!! So update soooon

That was such a great chapter! More! I need more please! I love how Barron has realized so many things since his father passed. And has made a conscious effort to not be a bully anymore. Also...I'm happy they have finally admitted their feelings for each other! But it makes me nervous because when things are going great thats when they have the chance to get really fucked up! We'll see wont we!?! DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN!!!

Wow...I am really loving this story! You are an amazing writer. I love all the detail you put into your work. Cant wait to read more so please update soon! I cant wait till they get to the new world!!! Oh! Also...I love your explanation on what caused all the people to die and why they have to leave our Earth. Could you fucking imagine that really going down! Holy hell! Such a great story! Sorry but I just love it!

I'll leave you a review--I should have left one days ago, actually. I loved the beginning of your story--LOVED it. Apocalypse fiction is my favorite, and as morbid as it may sound, I love mass die offs like you had. That's still my favorite part, probably--all the students finding the dead bodies at the mouth of the caverns. But I also love the rest of your story. It's amazingly well written. Good job! I look forward to the next update.

Awwwww! No cries! I promise that I was sending in my first review while you were posting your latest update! Which I cant wait to read! Kisses:)

Hi, Cia! I am hooked on this new story you posted and can't wait until tomorrow to read more or to find out what happened. Where they attacked and by whom? You are a great writer and very gifted. Hypnotic is one of my favorite's that you wrote out of the Carthera series and I have a feeling Cataclysmic Evolution will be the next!

Thanks for sharing your stories here on AFF with us!

~ Katie ~

You are back and with a new story! I am so happy! I am so excited for the next chapter that I can't sit still.....

I'm really enjoying this story so far, especially the way you're putting in the details to let us know it's in the future without an exposition block stating how futuristic it is.

I will admit though, I started reading it out of boredom, because your summary isn't usually one to pull me in, then I started reading it, and the story is nothing like I'd expect from the summary, and I like it a lot better than what I expected. I thought this was going to be a typical high school story with an overbearing dad and Revi showing Barron a wild side, after some school project or family emergency throws them together.

Maybe updating your summary to play up the end of the world scenario, and forcing everyone into a survival mode would help reduce the story shock?

Looking forward to the next update!

Oh my gosh! I just saw you posted another chapter!!!! You are so awesome!!!!

I don't know why but this story just reminded me that The Walking Dead will be back in October even though there are no Zombies in it, LOL.

Barron is a pretty cool kid, I like how he found and rescued Marya then brought her with him back to safety. He could be like her big brother now that she's all alone like he is.