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October 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I wish there was more. Nice job. Xoxo Robin
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October 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the read
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September 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an evolution! Can't wait for revi's!
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September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5: So glad to see review and Barron together! Can't wait to find out more about paradise....
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September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that last post with the misspelling (darn that auto correct)... I meant revi not review....
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September 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I loved it! I was NOT expecting that ending at all! Such a cool story! I absolutely think this should be made into a movie...and I dont mean one of those shitty made for TV movies...I'm talking the big fucking screen! This was just soooo great! I cant wait to read more by you and thank you again for sharing your talent with us:)
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September 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I loved it! I was NOT expecting that ending at all! Such a cool story! I absolutely think this should be made into a movie...and I dont mean one of those shitty made for TV movies...I'm talking the big fucking screen! This was just soooo great! I cant wait to read more by you and thank you again for sharing your talent with us:)
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September 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on chapter 2, but I'm loving this story! I haven't read much post-apocalyptic, but this one really intrigues me and I really feel for Barron and everyone who suddenly lost their entire family.
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September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awwww you little shit! Talk about a cliffhanger! This story just keeps getting better and better! I swear this would make one hell of a movie. I was hoping something crazy would happen because he fell in the water...and BAM...there it is! If I was Barron I would sneak off and dunk my fucking head in it! But it seems like it may already be helping his eyes! I cant wait to find out!!!!! More soon please!?! OH! Barron and Revi are too fucking cute together and im hoping it stays that way! But a little drama never hurt anyone;)
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September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, finally some action! Excited to see what happens next:)