rate_review Reviews

Holy dark turn Bat Man! That was a shocker and I loved it! Pretty awesome joseph knew he was gonna go fuck someone else! I wouldnt know how to handle it either if the person I was with was constantly telling me that they were fucking the house slave BUT in the story they live in a time and place where thats expected and mostly accepted. But either way it sure was hott. And dont get me wrong...if I owned a sex slave I would NEVER leave the house! Keep up the amazing updates:)

Wow that was extremely hott! Im glad he has a place he can go to to calm himself down after a bad day. And I gotta be honest here...sex between Joseph and Evelyn is pretty fucking amazing:) cant wait for an update!

i absolutely love this story. it is beautifully written and the character development is amazing.
I truly hope you continue it. I always look forward to the updates.

Thanks for being awesome

and now Claire is getting hate from things she didn't do, color me surprised...

Oh my goodness! Hot hot and more hot! This was such a good chapter! I loved how nervous Eddy was to tell Tyler about him and Joseph and then Tyler was like well im definitely not mad! Pretty funny... and then he just let Eddy keep being awkward! Loved it! Im glad it took longer than you planned to get to the meat of the story because like you pointed out...the backstory on everyone is very detailed and I love that. I feel like I really know whats going on with everyone. To the point of when something juicy is happening I catch myself thinking like OH SHIT! So and so is NOT going to like that or AWWWW so and so is gonna love that! So pleeeeease keep up your amazing updates and thank you again for sharing your talent with us :)

I stumbled on this story and I'm totally hooked. You do such a great job building up your characters. I couldn't stop reading so everything I had planned to do today kinda didn't happen :P I can't wait to see how the story progresses and the relationship between Joseph and Evlyn grow. Things are starting to get intense now that Eddy and Joseph are rooming together. Eekk!! :D

This was a realllllllly hot chapter. I cant wait to find out all the things that are going to happen while the guys are staying there. I hope Tyler isnt upset with Joseph for being with Eddy. But I have to admit...the drama I dread happening to Joseph is the same drama that makes this such an emotionally charged story! I still feel kinda bad for Evelyn...she obviously has such strong feelings for Joseph and though I admire how honest he is with her...lets face it...alot of times the truth hurts. So I guess I will just have to wait and see what you have in store for us! Thank you again for sharing your talent...it is much appreciated:)

Get it girl!!! That was so fucking hot! I loved how she wasnt upset when he took control of the situation...and also the way he protects her. I want this Mike guy to be for real too because Joseph could really use a friend. Uuummm I still hate Claire...annnnd...I just really want Joseph to be Evelyns first. At everything. I get that he doesnt want to hurt her because he knows how she feels about him and as young as she is- any kind of rejection can have such a bad affect on the rest of her sexual life and he just doesnt want to have any part of that. So yes I do understand why he wont do that with her yet. Buuuuut I have to be honest here...a HUGE part of me wanted Joseph to just throw Evelyn down on the floor and just lay into her! And I dont mean like the sweet lovemaking a girls first time should be...im talking about the kind of sex where you cant look each other in the eyes for a while afterwards because you are ashamed at how you just fucked like wild animals...not to mention how you talked to each other like you were a couple of $2.00 whores! YES!!! Now THATS what im talking about!!! So please keep up the amazing updates! I cant wait to read more!

Poor Joseph...suffering the hatred caused by someone else

Well, you were right, I haven't come to hate her, while she's a tad nasty, she isn't doing anything outright cruel (after all, I suspect she knows of Joseph's little sexcapades with her daughter). Adding a justification just makes her look more like a victim.