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for Control - #1 Salway Slut Trilogy

by Eve Leigh

schedule December 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Books, fanfictions, and everything in between, The Salway Slut Trilogy is the best thing I've ever read!!! And I've read it a dozen times. Love Eve Leigh!! Amazing writer!  

person sarlanda
schedule July 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This was the first slash story I really delved into. I'm deeply impressed by your creation of a world, community and society in a mere 33 chapters. The characters developed in no time at all, and you captivated the audience with Joseph almost immediately. I marvel at your accomplishment, simultaneously wondering how you managed to pull it off. Surprisingly enough, my favorite character development was in Ryan. There was a huge turnaround in attitude and his change offers hope for humanity. I, of all people, least expected him to have or grow a conscience. It was fitting that the scene ended with all of the key players in a safe, new, place with its own set of challenges and unknowns. This story teaches us all that it is acceptable, normal, and not shameful to have cravings and desires that are far from the regular vanilla that we're taught is acceptable in society. It's powerful and it's impactful. Lastly, I will add that I have passed over this story more times that I can count and am most grateful that curiosity finally got the better of me after all this time.

person Mona Thompson
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!! That was a perfect stopping point...I loved how he answered with one little word that packed such a fucking punch. I understand what you mean by needing a break from that world...its intense and emotionally drainjng and thats exactly what made this story so amazing. So you get some well deserved rest and recharge that imagination of yours because I need another one of your stories:)
person smint45
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you ended this!!!! Thank you so much for posting this story!!!! I'm eagerly waiting for the shortstory on friday^^See you again soon!!!
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
my favorite par to the day is when i sign in and you've updated this story.

xoxo
person Mona Thompson
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was a grrreat chapter. I have been hoping that Salway was going to make an appearance and BAM! He came with a vengeance. What a bastard. It was so interesting to see how Joseph reacted to him...from making his drink to not making asound when his bones were broken. AND I couldnt believe that Katherine and Troy are Salways too! My goodness! I also looooove the way Joseph was with Salways boytoy too and is going to hopefully try to buy him with the donation check. Well I cant wait for an update but I am very sad its coming to an end...but I get it.
person smint45
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter^^I'm glad evilyn sold him to the spiders web that will probably be the best choise for him except beeing free!!!! And I'm glad Joseph got some closure with Salway!!!! Thanks for the fast post and see you again with the last chapter!!!
person smint45
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!!! I love the way you are writing^^ This story is something new for me since I normaly really don't like het sex. But this story is so amazing that I really found it hot for the first time^^ I'm sad that this story will end soon but since there will be a sequal that is alright^^Hope to see you soon with the remaining chapters!!!!
schedule October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really great! I just thought I'd drop a compliment that Joseph is one of my all time favourite slave characters. He's his own person, but understands that he's a slave and the dynamics that he's been put through fits perfectly with the story line you have around him. I can't wait for the last few chapters and I'm excited that you've mentioned a sequel!

Also, thanks for dropping the compliment on my story, Hollow Earth. I have been reading Control since you first posted it and found it so gripping I was waiting happily for every update. Happy writing!
person Mona Thompson
schedule October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awww this was a good chapter...and you are so amazing at creating hott sex scenes! Wow! Just...so hott! I love how Tyler finally let Joseph get ahold of him and how sweet Joseph was with him. Kinda makes we wish I had a sex slave! Dont get me wrong...slavery is horrible in real life. Buuuuut if we are daydreaming...a sex slave wouldnt suck and I would be super nice! Im pretty happy Claire hasnt fucked with Joseph in a long time but that also makes me nervous because that could mean something is about to blow up. Not necessarily with Claire...but with someone. OH! I also loved when that jackass guy "ordered" Joseph to go get Evelyn and then made a snide remark about him being able to follow a simple order...and Evelyn said YOU DONT EVER ORDER JOSEPH TO DO ANYTHING! I was like you get em girl! Keep up the amazing updates :)