rate_review Reviews

Again, you have given an enigmatic almost Delphic piece of writing that retreats and advances with each sentence and movement of emotion. It is beautifully refined and transcendent in its appeal.

Thank you for presenting another compelling depiction of your skills.

I just had to say how much I love this story. Gorgeous prose, with just the right mix of wistful fancy and budding hope. I knew this would be a great story when I felt the yearning right along with Rafael.

This may be a little strange but when i first started to read this story i was listening to Agnes Obel's album Aventine at the time. Its almost been a fond companion when re reading old and new chapters.

My heart hurts for both Callum and Rafael, but with this recent update I'm so happy. I don't want the story to finish even though I want the happy ending. Haha.

The story is just simply beautiful

Pleas finish this soon, I can't wait. This is best I have read long time. Ps. Sorry my eglish.

Finally Rafael had the courage to write. And oh my, does that mean Callum really will go to Spain? I can't wait for them to make up!

I really REALLY love this story! I'm so glad I read this! I really love Callum. I think he really is in love withe Rafael and not just a puppy love or a childish crush. They're old enough, or Callum particularly, so I hope Rafael would already have the courage and take the next step. Yes it's hard especially on those times when male to male relationship is not that acceptable. And also, it'll be hard for Callum's parents especially since they treat Rafael like a family already. But I know they'll understand. I hope.


I'm hoping that this story would be longer though 'coz I love reading it! :) And I really hope Rafael and Callum would be together already because they're just hurting their selves like this.

Looking forward for the next chapter! Great story! Thank you for sharing this! :)

just rushed through all 8 chapters, but bookmarking for reread when it's done bc i want to savor your sentences; they deserve undivided attention

Well I believe that if a story leaves you wanting to read more after every chapter it's a pretty good sign don't you think?

aaaaaaaargh! Damn you! you are killing me! Every time I read a new chapter i get so excited and when I finish it I'm like jshdfhasj I need more!
Now if you excuse, me I will go back pulling my hair out until your next update.
Seriously I love your story, even though I will probably get bald by end, its worth it.

A very compelling narrative, and deliciously 'moreish'. Thank you for your efforts so far. P

I've read a few of your other stories and loved them all, so, as anticipated, I loved this one, too. You're descriptive without being superfluous, and that's just about the neatest thing ever. I was a little wary going into this one--the whole "fifteen" thing was some cause for alarm for me--but I'm glad I gave this a chance. Please keep doing what you do. *thumbs up*