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The ending was incredibly sweet and beautiful I wish I could read it for the first time again, oh wait! I can. This was an excellent story filled with a lot of sexy, hot and cute moments that could and would make anyone hornily happy. Thank you

I feel like that when Tony, Annie and Charisse leave the paradise like beach they'll start a big and very happy family with each other. This thought makes me feel really fuzzy and warm because it would make Annie's kind statement "And the boy lived happily ever after." even more beautiful. So once again thank you for writing such a charming and sexy story

Also the hot pirate movie was the final nail to the coffin for me when it comes to rating this beautiful story, the rating is twenty out of ten

This was really nice. Every young boy should experience pleasures at the hands of experienced, caring women like this!

This is my favorite fairy tale of all. After a stressful day, I just want to dive into this beautiful world and feel a gentle caress when someone says to me, "There, there - it's not so bad after all."

I've actually read a number of your stories, but for some reason it just took me for-freaking-ever to get around to leaving a review.  Sorry about that.  Anyway, this is my personal favorite.

Straight shota, or I guess just women/boys stories around here, are something I really enjoy, but only when they're done a certain way.  It gets super uncomfortable for me when I feel like anyone's being abused, and that includes stories where the boy dominates an adult woman (since then it just feels like the adult is being abused).  I'm not condemning anyone for writing these stories (Guidelines was clearly written with this in mind), and I realize that works for a lot of people, but I always prefer that stories with this kind of age difference involve kinder, gentler relationships.

That's exactly why this story appeals to me so much.  Annie and Cherisse are introducing Tony to sex, but it's pretty clear that they're never forcing him to do anything, and that neither of them want to hurt him.  It's really sweet how much they care for him, especially considering what his home life is like.

I also like that you did some world building.  Right from the first chapter, the story has the feel of a sort of fairytale, and it's very clear that something magical is going on, but I like that you actually crafted an entire cosmology around it with deity-like figures that built these places, and an established function for them, places where hurt but kind people can take as long as they need to heal before rejoining the world.

On a somewhat less emotional, more sex-related note, breast play is something I always like in sex scenes, and that bit in Chapter 2 with Tony and Cherisse...

"Hey, sweetie," she said. "You okay? You've been doing that for ten minutes."

That was seriously hot.

But yeah, overall, this was both a sexy read and a very nice, warmhearted one, and I think that's why it's still my favorite of yours.  Thanks for writing it!