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for Until It Hurts

by pseudocide335

person chibikodo
schedule September 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh Teo. Lautoro probably wasn't helped by your bossing him around. The flashback was adorable.
person chibikodo
schedule September 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Marcos the monster. Lautaro needs to reach out for help beyond dragging himself, Teo and Rico down.

Clint's got an awkward relationship with his parents.. that make me think he wouldn't know what to think of or act around Teo's mom.
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
loved chapter five. i am really liking lautaro now. i wanted him and teo to have sex. hell he isnt at the exclusive stage with clint yet he could have gotten away with it. and lautaro wouldnt be thinking about drugs for a while after that. loved mi cielo. that is uber romantic. "my sky" just lovely.
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love the cute flashback of chapter five. really sweet. love rico, latauros, and teos mother. she is a gem.
person Ghoti-Umbrella
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I noticed this " “You should take it off, Lautaro, only because I don’t you to stretch it out.” " and I couldn't find the reviews to check if someone else had pointed it out, so sorry if they have!


I loooovvvveeed these two chapters. I feel like I'm going to enjoy this story a LOT. I normally enjoy your stories anyway, but i think I have a soft spot for Teo and Clint. Look forward to the next chapter!
person chibikodo
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Teo made me chuckle joking about Clint's version of mexican food and the way Clint squirmed was cute.

Laurent sounds like trouble for Teo. Poor guy is probably going to end up hurt again or something.
This new story you've got going is great so far (and since I started commenting here I won't bother with fp).
person Gianina Rubio
schedule August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know you said gabacho refers to a non-hispanic put what does it mean. The thing is that I am of center american dissent so that word isn't in vocabulary and I feel that it's going to be used often so I really want to understand what you are writing. I look forward to your next update.

person J
schedule August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so hot, & i love teo and clint together. lautaro better not fuck things upppp please hahaha update asap please!!!!!
person staar
schedule August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Man this was good !!! ??? is this thing with them going to be like a love/hate thing or what ? BTW the ex really needs to go and get a life and not be in the way ...thank you loved the update see you soon !!!!!!
schedule August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
your welcome. :-) chapter four was good. i love teo even more. i love how agressive he is. i was hoping that clint would get his chance to blow teo back and was glad he did. cant wait for teo to get more kinky and domineering. write and post soon!