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I loved it...there's nothing more I can say to you. I really enjoyed the moments shared by Teo and Lautaro in this chapter, even though I'm usually just waiting around for more Clint/Teo.....their interaction was really sweet, and I'm glad to see that Lautaro might be moving on and bettering himself. He deserves it.
Now, about Marcos. I wanted to punch him in the face too. He makes me scared for Teo. When I was reading that, my own hands started to get sweaty. I hate him....I want him to die.
The blow job was great. I love the use of unconventional furniture in sex, as well as hair pulling. I thought it was great that Teo was looking at his browsing history and found "power bottoms."
Thanks for a great chapter :) can't wait for the next update.

oh my gawwwwwwwddd.
Made the mistake of reading this BEFORE doing my assignment and now I'm super distracted. I'm so addicted to the words that come out of your brain.

Your stories are my little baggie of powder in the dead make-up bin.

I need mooorrrrree http://www.quickmeme.com/img/de/de4b3aa0929fd1506d8bd5edfffaf3c7a35b87fa52d378292dcd5b015064fef3.jpg

I need to tell you this. I ADORE your story, I spend all my free time re-reading it and waiting around for the next update. Everything about your story makes it better than most other stories I've read both in print and online. My favorite part, though, are the ways your characters interact with each other. I love how slowly Clint and Teo are falling for each other. It makes me want to fist pump every time they act all cute with each other. Seriously, BEST. STORY. EVER.

Hi, I just started your story and devoured it. Love! Your characters are amazingly flawed but not were you want to pull your hair out because they are acting like idiots, you can emphasize with all of them. I do wish Rico would stand by his brother more but even that I can understand. Can't wait for another update.

Ugh! People don't like this??? Really??? I never review - it's absolutely painful on my phone. This is good writing. Complicated characters with real personalities that make horrible decisions! Don't get discouraged we're out there!

Can't wait till the next update :)

nuuuuuuuuh! Don't say you're letting yourself be discouraged just because you receive less reviews for this one. hmmm maybe, and now please dun hurt me for saying this, but just maybe you're a teeny weeny lil bit spoiled by getting so many reviews normally. If you think you're discouraged by only having 36 reviews at 11 chapters think of those who have like 3 reviews at 11 chapters and feel overly excited about every tiny review they are receiving. Just saying.

I admit I most often am too lazy to leave a review. I also do not have read everyone of your fics, just some of them. I also admit that at first when I read the summaries of your stories I dun feel captivated and passed them by. But you know the funny thing is, when I happened to begin to read them despite my initial disinterest I was immediately captivated, by the plot and especially the characters which I admit put me off from the summaries before. Every damn time it happened this way.

Your characters are not perfect but you really make me feel for them. They are soooo weird. I love it.

Oh and the sex is great btw, don't let yourself be told otherwise.

I apologize for not leaving a review sooner but after reading the latest author's note, I had to. I am loving Until It Hurts and always waiting on the next chapter. I especially like the 'non-traditional' components. For example, Teo isn't a pretty boy, the characters didn't immediately fall into an all encompassing love, and the drag. It makes for a much more interesting read and I do hope you continue. Honestly, the only reason I come to this site these days is to check for updates to Until It Hurts and one other WIP. I even lurk about on your tumblr page hoping for art updated/other tidbits.

Dude! I friggin love this story! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed til now but it's genius! Alll your characters are portrayed so well I've rarely seen such strong characterization in writing. It's like watching a movie where I see in my minds eye these fleshed out entirely human characters. Ps I love all the 3 men including Lautaro (too friggin cute) and I seriously look forward to every update. This story is so refreshing and I loooooove how diverse your cast is andddd (this sounds kinda racist) but the way your characters act like to a degree make sense with their racial background in the context of their socioeconomic background without becoming a typical caricature. Your story is literally one of the only stories I follow and everything seems pretty right with pacing, plot, social commentary. If people don't get the genius and wittiness and realism of this then.....that's a shame cuz they just don't get it. Anywho support you! Thanks for writing!

I like this story a lot. Your writing is good and very interesting.
I don't think you you should worry too much what the readers want. If we'd know what happens, it wouldn't be so interesting anymore. If they are looking for just porn they should go find it elsewhere and if it's not the kind they want, too bad. I personally don't like to read stories with porn in every chapter, unless it's relevant, because then it's just porn and that I can find anywhere. Good stories with long chapteres :) are harder to find. Well, that's just what I think.
I hope you feel more motivated in the future. I am looking forward to new updates.