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“You don’t know Michael Cera?” Clint asked, flabbergasted. “He’s like the biggest dork ever.”

“Must be why you like him then,” Clint replied with a grin.

Not sure if I'm misreading, you meant to write Teo or if this is some mad hint that Teo is a figment of Clint's imagination. ;D


Faaaabulous as always. More, please. :3

Hopefully Lautaro's interactions with Marcos don't backfire and Teo ends up hurt again. Seriously hoping that group Lautaro is supposed to be attending helps Lautaro grow up and believe he is better than what Marcos (and himself) thinks he is.

Also, Teo and Clint's relationship is cute. It's good that Teo understood Clint's reluctance.. since Clint's family sounds pretty douchey.

I. Fucking. LOVE YOU. I could seriously kiss you. I released the biggest squeal of excitement when Clint asked Teo if he would be his boyfriend, and then I laughed when he said he'd think about it. Oh gawd, and then the morning after the sex...........they're so adorable. SO ADORABLE. "I can't believe I slept with you." Such a food snob. The thing with Lautaro made me sad, and I hope what he said to Teo about the relationship doesn't end up being true. I can't wait until the next update.

Yeesh. All this beating around the bush and fighting.. just for them to have make-up sex. Lauotaro is just clinging to Teo because Teo reminds him of the old days when things weren't so bad when he should really be trying to resume his life and start again without the past getting in the way.

After the falling out and Teo being the really stubborn and seemingly unforgiving type I felt like he did forgive Clint a lil too quickly in the end and we were rushed wammbamm into the relationship stuff (and that after months of tiptoeing). Clint and Teo must feel the same lol.

BUT, I only felt that for a second, because it's already the 13th? or so chapter and I'm more than ready for boyfriend territory with those two. After all with these two complicated sex bunnies I'm excited to read and learn how they manage a relationship together. I'm looking forward to lots of conflicts and make up rough sex. The part until now felt almost like building up to the real stuff haha. But a very nice build up!

Oh and like always, you excel at the smexy stuff! Delicious!

btw I just compared your "Hits - Reviews" ratio to some other fics around here and I gotta say it's pretty awesome. You only have around 3800 hits but already 58 reviews (soon to be 59 lol), whereas others have like over 10000 hits and like 10 reviews.

You know what that means huh? It means that even though maybe the getup of the story doesn't draw in people immediately or maybe even discourages some, the ones who stumble over it and decide to begin to read feel way more compelled to say something about it. Means the adventures of the characters and the engaging plot must produce lots of emotions within the readers so they want to express it. You should take that as proof that your endeavors in continuing and finishing this lovely piece are highly appreciated (if you still felt unsure about it...)

I am so glad I decided to start reading this story, the description does not do it justice. I somehow managed to pace reading this over a couple days, and I can't wait for the next update, I need to know if Clint is the one to go back to Teo. I love your writing style, how you switch easily between the POV's, and I love your characters. I was so glad when Teo finally bitched to Eric about feeling jealous and resentment towards Lautaro. I'm really wondering what Marcos is going to do too.

I hate Clint....I want to hate Clint. I really do. But I can't, even though I'm so fucking pissed at him right now.

Poor Teo :( I can't even handle the angst within this chapter. I just want to hold him while at the same time slapping Clint in the face.

Why have you done this to my emotions......?! And now I'll have to be patient and wait until the next chapter which will probably make me cry again. Yes, I cried. A little.

I love your writing.

Hmm interesting chapter... really wish Clint had stopped Robert because Brayden is most likely drunk and alone at a bar because of Clint... sigh....

I'm very interested to see how this story will progress because unless they physically bump into each other, I can't see how Clint and Teo would reunite... Clint is too cowardly and Teo is preoccupied (and in my opinion, deserves more than Clint anyway....)

Hi, now I'm a little peeved with Clint, he has to be such a wuss he let Branden be sexually assaulted as well. Maybe he could rationalize his abuse through alcohol but to watch another and not intervene, he is pretty low. His later report does not excuse him but makes him more comprabable for understanding the situation and not reporting earlier. Finally shaking my head at your characters for being an idiot. Want Teo and make Clint like able again