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Wanda, I have to apologize for my lack of reviews. There really is no excuse I can give, so I won't even try.
However, I have been reading every update and waiting for the next with so much anticipation I can hardly stand it. I dread the day your story might come to an end. On that note, I'd like to discuss the story. I LOVE TEO. I cannot tell you that enough. With Clint, it is just the cutest couple I have ever had the pleasure of reading about. I was upset about the falling out Teo and Lautaro had, even more so recently with events going on in my own life. I like how you portray Lautaro and his addiction, not necessarily as something to be pitied for or ashamed of, but just as something that needs fixed.
I also admire the way in which you write Teo's character, and I often find myself empathizing with his insecurities (appearance, personality, etc). It's a nice change of pace to read a story where not every character is beautiful, and the "ugly" ones are allowed to take center stage (I don't think Teo is ugly btw).
This chapter once again broke my heart. I was so excited when Clint returned the sentiment, and said it multiple times. But then you had the line about how the fall would be as great as the high, and I just knew something was going to happen that would have me nearly in tears. And of course you delivered.....
So now I'll be sitting around checking for updates every hour, because I can't believe you let it end like that!!
Thanks again for an amazingly well written update to an already great story.

Great chapter! Nice crushing of the bubbly hearts at the end of that chapter! The angst oh my is both beautiful and terrible! Omg so scared that this fight will actually put a dent in this relationship that is so strong but still fragile in some places and you seemed to have chipped a big one. Tables habe turned and teo IS actin crazy even tho his point about micro aggression is very true but seems like Clint got more or less caught up in teos personal shit. Even if Clint was feeling it a bit it's hard to consciously change what society has taught you (alpha male is the only way to be) so of course the gay community sadly isn't really an exception either. Anywho anxiously waiting for more. Doing great, Wanda, sorry I don't review regularly but I really appreciate and enjoy this story and the characters!

Clint, I just want to smack you upside the back of your head for not gettibg it.. but then again, hopefully you will think about what Teo said and it will make sense.

The beginning of the chapter was great but the end is making me pout. Haha

I love santiago so much omg. I'm actually pretty fond of all the characters which is probably why I fell in this so quickly. They're all so well rounded and fleshed out without falling into cliches. I do hav a question about th incident that landed Teo in the hospital: why did Lautaro have drugs that he hadnt paid for?

That was really lovely Christmas sex. And right now I'm more excited where this story is heading then ever. Also I'm beginning to ask myself if Lautaro is going to survive the end of this story. So many questions. Will we hear Clint admitting his love for Teo? Teo's reaction to Clint's silence was very Teo-like. Maybe he thinks some perfect and hot dude like Clint can't fall in love with someone as ordinary and mediocre as Teo and that what they're having is only temporary anyway, until Clint finds a better match, or is simply tired of Teo. I'm just speculating, but such inner self doubts feel like ones a person like Teo, who always tries to appear very strong on the outside would have...

Thanks for the new chapter and thanks for writing! Just in general...

Oh Teo. Your confession might seem like it was blown off but Clint is so emotionally stunted and awkward, he doesn't know how to react or express himself. You just have to wait for him to say it on his own terms.

And Lautaro, he is such a mess. Clint was right, he needs to believe in himself. Otherwise all he will do is keep hurting himself and others.

It's so sappy but they make me smile. I was almost imagining sparkles and shiny eyes when Clint and Teo were in the attic having their special moment.

Awww I really liked this chapter!!! I could feel Teo's emotions in this one... and the almost-I-Love-You moment killed me!!!! In a good way.

Preach it Teo! Nothing wrong with being female, annnd where do men come from? Women! :)

Anyway, I was surprised by Teo's panic and self-flaggelation because Lautaro is missing. Hopefully Lautaro ism't with Marcos. That man is just bad news.

So much drama with Lautaro. He knows exactly how to hurt Teo. What I wonder is.. did Clint know that his interference would cause problems and he shared it anyway out of jealousy?