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Nice story, I like how you write :). Nouns in Spanish have their own gender, so "bazofia" stays "bazofia" regardless of its gender (whish is feminine, by the way).

Thank you Lautaro, for fibally finding the courage to take control ofyour life so you can stop destroying it and hurting Teo, Rico and their family.

Oh Clint. Talking about how your feeling might be cold comfort but it's better than not knowing at all. Patience.

Looking forward to the next chapter

I'm so excited for the next chapter. This plot is engrossing! Please update soon

ok. you scared me pretty bad with chap 21. im glad lautaro is still alive.

Goodness. Somehow they need to brjng Marcos down and get him put away in jail. Lautaro just needs to separate himself from the tumor that is his drug addiction and Marcos.

Boundaries, yay? Poor Clint doesn' know how to react because sure he's experienced some emotional trauma but nowhere near the extent of Teo.

I hope this new job will be the start of something great for Teo.

There are words to describe how happy your work makes me, but I am sadly too lazy to sit and think of them all, let alone write them. But the picture you drew.......holy fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck I loved it. Thank you so much for indulging me in that. Now, the story. I was so close to having an emotional fictional breakdown waiting to see whether or not Teo would come to his senses and forgive Clint, and if Clint would pull his head out of his ass and tell Teo just how awesome he is. I'm glad to see they both realized they were wrong. Lautaro....oh, Lautaro. What more is there to say other than I hope this helps him get clean.

I wanted to tell you. I went through the story again and re-read my favorite parts, and I realized just what it is that I love so much about this work. You have a way of writing what would in most other stories be a cheesy scene (one that would typically make me cringe) and making it beautiful. Some of the lines stick in my head, and I am often struck by the simplicity of this romance and the way in which your descriptions give layers to it that are so human. Their relationship is both ordinary and extraordinary. One line, where Clint is sniffing Teo (like a total creep) is my absolute favorite: "Clint wasn't sure why he smelled so wonderful, but Clint doubted it came from a bottle. Maybe Teo didn't smell at all; maybe it was Clint't brain manufacturing the scent based on the strength of his own attachment." It kills me EVERYTIME I read that. That is what makes your story so beautiful, Wanda. Your characters are beautifully genuine.

(And the part where Teo answers with "This much," and then whispers it again. WTF? You have twisted my emotions with adorable.)

Oh my gosh, my heart. I can't stand seeing Teo so down. I'm glad him and Clint can have a discussion like adults, even if it takes them five days to do it. I hope they can both stick to working on their issues, because I feel they're so perfect for each other.

Yay for Rico!

Seriously?! I just want to take Marcos out back and deal with him myself because dang, why do they do this to themselves? Okay obviously messig wuth gangs can be dangerous but they're not gods. And Rico is right, they're not in Mexico (though I am sure there are corrupt cops everywhere around the world).

At least Ashley said yes and Clint and Teo made up. Haha

Happy new year! :D

I loved this chapter. And then you made them fight again. :C

You're characters are all so believable and your writing is so clear and exciting. Don't ever stop writing. :)

Me again!

I just wanted to talk about the bit where Teo tries to submit. I thought it was VERY well done. You could tell how he wanted to try for Clint, and that his 'inability' to submit wasn't because of lack of trust for Clint, but something he doesn't trust about himself. That's how I saw it. I mean, he might just not like submitting, to be fair, but he'd still be able to give it a go, rather than it bringing up so much bad thought.

Anyway, more UiH love. <3