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for Until It Hurts

by pseudocide335

person Ghoti-Umbrella
schedule August 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
"Review Until It Hurts" made me giggle. :3

First of all, I thank you for skilfully writing how to pronounce Teo. Smooth.
Second: YAS MORE WANDA

I'm loving Teo so far. Clint seems pretty cute in his own way too. I can definitely get behind these two. :3

I don't know what I'd do if you ever stopped writing. It would make me a very sad Ghoti. Seeing an update from you always makes me smile. :)
person staar
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Teo's brother is a softie !!!! and I see bad problems coming.. sorry but Lautaro is just going to bring a lot a bad things to Teo with that Marcos guy....thanks for the update and hope to see you soon !!!!!
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really love the dialogue u have between rico and teo and clint and his sis. really realistic. also rico is kinda deep to me. he didnt just accept what happened with lautaro at face value. i think its beautiful how he was there for his friend despite the severity of what happened. i also understand why teo felt somewhat betrayed by it. i hope lautaro is able to heal from the trauma of his life. and i am so happy that teo and clint have a date coming up. cant wait to read what they do and say. this is awesome. write 100 chaps! and plz cont. to put the spanish glossary at the end of the chaps. i missed it this week.
person chibikodo
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha Clint's sister may be asexual but she sure can say inappropriate things (ie. don't need to know) to her brother in a super market.

So this Marcos guy was a drug dealer slash.. what? to Laurent... and Teo seems to have found himself in a rather sticky situation. Is Teo going to end up hurt again?
person Tinker
schedule August 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the character interactions. :) I can't wait to learn more about them (especially Teo).
person Kira
schedule August 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I love your story! :D
person staar
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't believe Teo and what he did...he sure has Clint's attention now can't wait for more !!!! thanks and see you soon I hope !!!!!
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i am absolutely loving this story! teo is too sexy and demanding. i luv it. and clint has no clue what he had gotten himself into. i love the dialogue. cant wait for the next chap.
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Teo! He's amazing! I look forward to more of him!
person ger
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
 La Casa Negro should be la Casa Negra because house is feminine the color of the house also has to be feminine