rate_review Reviews

Awh man, I was so excited that there was a new chapter, but now I'm sad it's over. This was a nice ending, and it wrapped up really well.
I'm glad everyone got their happy ending. <3

I would definitely buy the ebook! My kindle always needs some more kinky gay romance. :3

Different from what I usually read but I liked it. Thanks for all your hard work and seeing this story through to the end. I was disappointed though that there wasn't much about theo's job as a chef. He seemed really reluctant about the whole thing and kind of like he thought it sucked but wasn't it supposed the be more of like his dream job? Was so excited when the old guy mentioned it and clint jumped on the opportunity but then it was hardly a scene and just became meh. Enjoyed all the other family cooking and eating scenes so much though!

:D Yay happy endings! I am glad Lautaro has finally found himself again, Rico loves Ashley to the point he drives her crazy (hee) and Clint and Teo are still happy together.

I would definitely be up to buying this in ebook form (Smashwords?) because I really enjoyed it.

Also, slain by the joke about Clint's faux kidnapping being turned into a white-washed straight movie. ;)

Do I sense a sequel as well? Really hope so. I enjoyed this story so much, and the journey they all took. If you are thinking of ebook publishing and doing some editing, it felt like the ending was paced a lot faster than the rest. Around like chapter 23 when Teo and Clint were going through a bit of a rough patch, I thought there was going to be more build up and tension that they may break up, but then they just got over it. I think you glossed over a few weeks, and maybe throwing in a scene or two in there about what they were doing, how they were both being effected by their situation might be nice.

Hi, just wanted to let you know it's tousle, not tossel:

tou·sle
verb: tousle; make (something, especially a person's hair) untidy.

Yes! I love the cohabitation! I loved the sex! I loved the cute and kinda awkward wedding!I love it all!

:D In its own way this chapter already felt like the end. Rico and Ashley will be happy, Clint and Teo have reached the point in their relationship where they're open and comfortable with one another. Marcos is in jail (lol) and Lautaro is hopefully free (and clean) with a second shot at life.

But nothing wrong with being greedy and wanting more. hee

I'm so glad Lautaro is okay! I was super worried about him getting strung up by his inestines in Guatemala. AND how cute is teo cuddling clint omg

Lautaro stresses me out but i didnt think he would leave omg! I cried real tears reading this its so sad. I'm gonna miss him! But i already miss the power play with clint i hope teo feels better soon

Oh my gosh, my heart! Poor Teo! I just want everything to work out for him. I hope that Lautaro finds what he needs, and that everything goes how he plans. I have a feeling it wont though... It's too tense, the wait is going to kill me.

There were a couple of possible mistakes I noticed? It might be me being dim though. Ahaa. :3
"Tug in the tub..." Should this have been dug?

" “I don’t think I ever saw that,” Teo murmured, resting his chin on Teo’s shoulder." You have a habit of slipping Teo's name in. I think you're obsessed. :P

"Marcos has never believed I’d ever on him" Maybe a missing word?