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Awww, that's so sweet at the end with David and Will. :)

But Will has been to his stateroom that time they hooked up after the dance thing, right? Although he was drunk...lol

I agree with David about seeing Pearl Harbor and seeing the names from the USS Arizona. It's very sad and it makes it all very real when you're right there.

This was another great chapter! :)

i so still love will and feel so sorry for the situation david is in. cant wait for next update!

I like your story it's very interesting. I feel so bad for David though being forced into a marriage he doesn't want because of his father. Ugh I hate people who force their kids like that. Good chapter!

Another amazingly awesome chapter, Whitewolf! :)

David is so torn and he's under a lot of pressure to make a good impression on his future in-laws. The future in-laws he doesn't even want. So sad.

Will seemed very vulnerable in this chapter. He wasn't the cocky kid who was out to seduce David. I like the change in him; it made him more human. :)

I'm looking forward to chapter three! :)

will is the sexiest coolest guy ever. i like the fact that even though david was a bastard the morning after, he still gave him a chance. he is hot!!!

What a terrific story, wolf! I LOVE it! :)

Poor David, he has to marry Tessa to please his parents. At only eighteen - ridiculous. Their parents don't even care about their kids' happiness.

I love Will. He's pretty funny. Will and Willow. lol I thought Willow was a girl's name. Will Smith's daughter is named Willow.

I can't wait for the next chapter. It's such a pleasure to read a well-written story like this one.

Great job, wolf! :)

dayum!! that was hot. i love will and willow. such threesome potential. cant wait for more. update very soon plz!