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I wonder what kind of excuses David keeps telling his parents and Tessa that he's able to just take off with Will so much. Not that I'm complaining. lol

And why is Will so uncomfortable with letting David know he speaks so many languages? Is he just being shy about it? Or is there another reason besides him wanting to please his parents?

have i mentioned how much i love this story? omg! so fuqn hot! plz write 1000 chaps cuz i can't get enough!

just read chapters 7 & 8. love the fact that will and david were able to watch the sunset together. and it was so sweet that david pushed himself to face his discomfort of heights for will. and will was so supportive of david when david needed him. then when they were at the great barrier reef and will got sick david shouts because he was so worried about will. i love the fact that they both shed tears over one another. excellent writing and i cant wait for their next love scene. also, i really like willow a lot too. would u consider a side story for him???? pretty plzzzzzz!?

Omg, that was funny at the end! Caffeine doesn't affect me either. I'm like Will - I wish it did! I can drink a large coffee from Dunkin Donuts or Mickey D's (which is what I have right now actually), and take a nap right after. lol It really sucks.

I thought Will was so sweet during the climb. He was there for David, he didn't make fun of him, and he didn't tell Willow about him either. I definitely think he's falling hard for him, which probably isn't good b/c if this comes out, I can see David's parents freaking out and rushing this marriage b/c the father wouldn't want anything to ruin his reputation. He seems like that sort of asshole.

Great chapter, wolf! :)

What a great ending to the chapter! They both see fireworks - which is probably how they feel about each other.

David certainly has a lot of thinking to do.

I can't wait to read more! :) This is such a terrific story! =)

awesome! love will. like willow and like david. write more plz.

Chapter 5: Sex in an alley! What would David's snobby parents think of that? lol

Good cover-up about the "girl" Wren and her sick fiance. lol I was thinking the same thing; if he's seen with another girl it would look suspicious. Why are they so worried about being seen together? What, guys can't hang out together? Would those stupid people think David is gay just by hanging around Will? Well, of course WE know the truth, but still, why can't they just hang out together? I think they're paranoid. :)

Ok, on to chapter six. :)

god this story is so hot! love the alley sex. awesome. poor will though. cant wait for the next chap!

Why is Will and Willow's father such an asshole? There's no excuse for talking to your child like that. All it does is get him to hate you.

I'm glad Will got some time alone with David, but the more he spends time with him, the more he's going to be hurt in the long run. David too. Oh, maybe if Will's father knew who Will was with he'd think twice about reprimanding him. David comes from money and power - I'm sure the twins' father would like to be part of that. lol

chapter four was really good. wish the lemon was longer and more detailed. and i wonder if wills father has an inappropriate attraction to will and treats him badly because of it. i wish willow did hit him. gotta admit im still in love with will.