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November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
my poor will! waiting...
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November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol, they had "hotels" like that in Jersey where I grew up. ;)
David's acting like this will be the last time he and Will will be together. How many days do they have left?
And why does Will always dress like a girl? Just so they can hold hands and kiss in public? I would think that if caught, he would get into a hella amount of trouble with a girl, then with a boy.
As always, I can't wait for more! :)
David's acting like this will be the last time he and Will will be together. How many days do they have left?
And why does Will always dress like a girl? Just so they can hold hands and kiss in public? I would think that if caught, he would get into a hella amount of trouble with a girl, then with a boy.
As always, I can't wait for more! :)
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October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
im loving these twins. could u please describe willow a bit more? cant form a solid mental picture of him. have someone beat their dads ass plz.
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October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually surprised W&W haven't been to Rome before. Haven't they been everywhere the ship has taken them so far? lol
I really feel badly for both Willow and Will. Willow b/c he just wants his brother to be happy and it hurts him seeing Will so miserable, and Will b/c he really wants David and he knows he will be heartbroken when the cruise ends.
As always, you have me craving more!! :)
I really feel badly for both Willow and Will. Willow b/c he just wants his brother to be happy and it hurts him seeing Will so miserable, and Will b/c he really wants David and he knows he will be heartbroken when the cruise ends.
As always, you have me craving more!! :)
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October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
omg! those two r blisteringly hot! luv it!
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October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
They're both getting deeper and deeper into each other. I wonder what David is going to do.
Oh, I did notice another minor mistake: in the beginning of the chapter the tour guide introduces herself as Isabelle, but then when she introduces their driver, her name is Gabrielle. At least the 'elle' part is right! lol :)
Oh, I did notice another minor mistake: in the beginning of the chapter the tour guide introduces herself as Isabelle, but then when she introduces their driver, her name is Gabrielle. At least the 'elle' part is right! lol :)
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October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet chapter! I love when Will acts all flustered and embarrassed. :)
But why is Will always uncomfortable when David brings up his extensive travel?
The ending was perfect. :) You can tell how much they like each other. Oh, the last dialogue when Will is speaking and he's telling David that he likes (or loves) spending time with him, you wrote 'spending' twice. :)
Looking forward to more! :)
But why is Will always uncomfortable when David brings up his extensive travel?
The ending was perfect. :) You can tell how much they like each other. Oh, the last dialogue when Will is speaking and he's telling David that he likes (or loves) spending time with him, you wrote 'spending' twice. :)
Looking forward to more! :)
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wait, what? Why did Will leave? lol
At least now David is realizing that he's falling for Will. I'm sure he and Will are hoping this cruise will never end. I know I am! lol
At least now David is realizing that he's falling for Will. I'm sure he and Will are hoping this cruise will never end. I know I am! lol
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September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I have three scrumptious chapters to catch up on! Well, now only two. lol
Poor Will - he's so jealous of Tessa. He's really fallen for David and I think the feeling is mutual.
I do feel badly for Willow though; Will seems like quite the handful when he's in a pissy mood. lol Which unfortunately is often when David isn't around.
Ok, on to the next chapter. :)
Poor Will - he's so jealous of Tessa. He's really fallen for David and I think the feeling is mutual.
I do feel badly for Willow though; Will seems like quite the handful when he's in a pissy mood. lol Which unfortunately is often when David isn't around.
Ok, on to the next chapter. :)
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September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Why didn't Will use any lube? He might not have had any handy, but I'm sure in that expensive stateroom or the bathroom there must have been some lotion or something he could have used.
Anyway...it was really sweet that Will is taking David to all these beautiful places b/c David is so special to him. :)
Anyway...it was really sweet that Will is taking David to all these beautiful places b/c David is so special to him. :)