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for Tears of the Neko

by craftingmom

schedule August 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Bittersweet, what a good chapter... Will we get to see more of Damien and Kayden... Ummm... ' Together?' ^.^ Yeah, looking forward to more of that... Hopefully this chapter was a cliffhanger, and not a cut to "curtains blowing in the wind..."
person zas
schedule August 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Other plans what could they be lol. Love this chapter a lot, can't wait for the next one.
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, hooray! As awful as Kayden getting whipped was, Damien's finally getting wise to his brother. Hopefully Kayden's trust isn't too broken by this. Thank goodness for Ellis, he helped a lot in this chapter! And thank you for the notes on the updated chapters, I'll have to go back and check them out! Love this story, thanks for the update!
person staar
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Roman hurt my poor kitten !!!!! again !!!! but hopefully now Damien sees that his brother is not so nice !!!!!! thanks again for the update ...and now he knows that he lied too !!!!!! see you soon !!!
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is so great! I love it and hope you will stick with it!
person snowleopard
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry! I didn't mean to sound pushy about updating daily and understand RL gets in the way. I am just super happy you still find time to update as fast as you do. Thank you!!!!

I am so mad at Damien for allowing Kayden to be hurt in that way by Roman. You would think the little neko has gouged him instead of just scratching him. Geeze, what a big baby! Granted, to give him the benefit of the doubt, he was probably more shocked plus cat scratches due hurt and I know from experience from trying to cut my fur baby's nails or give her, her medicine.

I have really grown quite fond of Garin and can see him and Ysmenia as parent type figures to Kayden in his new life. They really care for him and his well being.

I hope Damien and Harrison catch on fast to Roman and that Damien allows Kayden to punish him for the hurt he has caused him.

person snowleopard
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, another reason I am very upset with Damien is that he should have seen the bruising around Kayden's neck! What is he blind? I mean Garin and Ysmenia saw it right away!
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gosh stop jerking my emotions around like this I don't think I can handle any more. When Kayden was getting whipped I felt my heart clench and then I was squealing at how cute Damien was when he was apologizing. Haha I'm glad you liked my comment before I have to admit I giggled a little when I was writing it =P thank you for this awesome chapter you rock
person Smint45
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god finally!!! I hope Damien will also find out that roman wanted to kill him!!! Time for some loving time for our poor neko!!!! See you again soon!!!!
person Theystolemyname
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Roman can go to hell for what he had done! I really hope that he will get some harsh punishment. At the very beginning I thought he was a nice guy, but... yeah, never judge somebody by first impression.