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Great job for creating this endearing fic and thanks for sharing. I'm always a sucker for underdog protagonist with an attitude and a hero who needs saving himself at times but please, please, pretty please....stop jerking my heart around with my precious Kayden. He had me twisted around his little finger at the first twitch.

So looking forward to the last chapter which is hopefully a happy ending and the epilogue. Hope to hear/read from you more. Kudos!

evil cliffie!

Chapter 14- Very nice, so glad to see you posted again! I found an error...

""Well, the guards caught a man trespassing by the stables. He isn't one of our servants and he was carrying a pistol. The guards let Arnett at him...for punishment. I observed Arnett finesse him with the whip. I had invited Roman to join in the questioning considering how upset he was when he thought Kayden attacked you. But surprisingly, or perhaps no [should be NOT] so surprisingly, he declined.""

Minor, but I'm a stickler for that sort of thing personally, and you'd asked for corrections if anyone noted anything. I gave the surrounding paragraph for reference. Nice chapter though, I'm looking forward to the next one!

Ch 15- Oh no oh no oh no... I was holding my breath through so much of this... Please update soon, before I pass out! I had my hand over my mouth while I was reading this. I'm so worried for Kayden... After things finally got really good for him, too! Oh goodness... This is really good writing, I love this story and the characters are so engaging.

OMG i am going to die waiting for your next update !!!! Don't you dare to kill my poor boy !!!!!!!! Roman needs a big beating !!!!!!

noooooooo! precious kayden has to be alright!

That was very mean writer, dear, to make us wait until the next Chappy to find out if the lovely little kitty makes it! Or if you ruthlessly decide to make us cry big wet tear because you killed the dear little thing off! Don't you dare! I'll never forgive you for killing the Neko! He's to cute to die! Worried G

AHHH!!! Kayden!!! :(
I've been silently reading, but really busy. I can't believe chapter 17 is almost here!!

oh my god ... i love this so much

Other plans.. it sounds good i like to read about other plans :)))))

i have a feeling Roman would do some devil thing soon i am afraid for our cute kitten

FINALLY !!!! He believed him, that his brother is a bad person !!!!!! now the hunt is on to see who is helping him......thank you you for the update see you soon !!!!