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I just...no it can't be over....my mind can't handle the fact that there's no more. This was was AMAZING and I seriously love you. I feel sad for Damien knowing his brother was such a a**hole but at least he got Kayden out of it. When he died I thought I was going to die too whew good thing you saved him though or you woulda had a lot of upset fans ;P thank you for this awesome story!

Oh, this was very nice, thank you! I loved it! And it was satisfying to have Roman's admission coming from his own mouth, thank you for that.

If you're adding scenes... Hmmm... One or two more of Damien and Kayden having sex together would be nice. Yum...

I'm so glad Kayden didn't die it would have been too sad. I really loved your story but I do think you could make it way better by reviewing and rewriting it. It's a great idea to expand it some more. I think it would be great to add some more character development to the story. Although I really loved it, the story felt kinda rushed if that makes sense. But keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more work from you!

*tear* This story was beautiful. Thank you for sharing something so wonderful with us. :)

oh my god

our little kitten has to be ok

oh it would kill us if something happen to kayden

please update soon

Y? Y evil cliffie? i read start to now in just tonight only to end up at an evil cliffie T.T *cries in a corner* too cruel master/mistress author, too cruel T.T. i came to love this story after the first chapter only to find my self ending up at a cliffie T.T i can't wait for your next amazing update :) Keep up the awesome work^^ (literally i found this at maybe 1000 pm or so and it is now nearing 2 am. you are amazing my friend)

I am so upset right now! I saw the kitten's picture online that was up for adoption, emailed and called about her, but when I got to the shelter she had already been adopted!!!! Hisses!!!!!!

Soooo, I am slightly upset with Damien for not realizing Kayden had been stabbed when they pulled him off the assassin. But, he just found out his brother tried to have him killed so he's forgiven. Thank gosh Damien's doctor is in the room with them and can save Kayden!

Oh, I don't think Damien will have his brother killed but he can let Kayden torture him and then sell Roman into slavery for life so he can see what life on the other side is like.

Oh thank god he is ok!!!! I'm soooo glad!!!! Thank you so much and see you tomorrow for the last chapter!!!!

this was awesome :3 i didnt realize u updated so fast ^^ i didnt think to look at the uplpad date yesterday :P oops. granted by the time i finished reading it it was almost 2 in the morning, so i dont really think my brain was functioning all that well either... anyway, loved it!! and once again i am really excited about the next chapter :3 Keep up the AWESOME work!!!!

Is Kayden a bleeder? Otherwise I can't understand how he's bleeding to death from some simple cut through skin and muscle tissue (and well, it sounded like he lost buckets of blood). But...if you actually suggest that maybe the stabbing caused some puncturing of oh I dunno, some pretty important internal organs in the abdomen, like the gut, the liver, the kidney, hell maybe one of those big, fat blood vessels around there, then I'm sorry to say, but poor Kayden won't survive by simple stitching of the outer skin. I fear he would bleed to death internally. Maybe they should rather think about giving him that water to drink instead of cleaning him up with it, after all he will need lots and lots of fluids with all the blood loss ensuing ;)

Okay, I hope I dun come across as too sarcastic but my inner vet can't help it. I do enjoy your story a lot but this sounds a bit too simple. I know there's this thing called "artistic liberty" but by all means, some researching in certain cases should be considered.