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Ah, poor Brennan. Hopefully his parents will come around soon.

I can see Kyle's point too though - he's afraid to come out and he shouldn't be rushed; he should be able to come out when he's ready - not be pushed into it.

I'm looking forward to see what happens next. :)

Ok, now I have to r&r LbaL. :)

wow. brennan is an interesting character. i am glad he got up the courage to tell his parents. i thought he was gonna ask ryan to "pretend" to be his boyfriend so he could do it the way he wanted to. kinda feel for his parents a little because not only does he come out, he shares the extent of his sexual activity which is alot for a parent to grasp at one time. hope his parents become supportive of him if not at least tolerant.

So I bought this book off your website, cause it was an interesting start. I'll be blunt here, it was interesting in the realistic sort of way but not in the way that I want to read the story sort of way. Things can be realistic and still interesting without being overblown dramatic is my only true criticism. I feel like I was robbed of some huge coming of age story with Ryan, Brennan, and Morgan to be honest. Like there is this whole loss of innocence, but at the same time not a loss of innocence. It's more like a limbo. I'm keeping this really vague on purpose, because you haven't put the chapters up here.

This was another fun chapter, Allison. :)

I like how Ryan so easily accepts that he might be gay.

I like his new friends. I can tell though that Brennan is really into him and vice-versa. I wonder if anything will come of it and how upset Kyle and Morgan will be if and when it happens.

Interesting, to be honest I am not in love with any of the characters. Ryan seemed like a sweetheart but I mean really oblivious. Brennan is a bit of a dick and rather wishy washy. Morgan's manipulative but also you feel a bit bad for him. I am not sure why there is no Kyle POV, maybe I only find him interesting since there hasn't been a chapter from his perspective. Seems like a weird love triangle thing going on...oh btw Jason, I mean this is the deal, how come he didn't ask Ryan out, did Ryan really move far away? Meh, good start at the same time I am not sure of the direction of the story either.

Heya Allison!

Finally had time to check out your new story! I remember Harmony and Homophobe. The names in the story sound familiar but I can't remember who was who, you know?

Ok, on to the next chapter. Maybe it will refresh my memory. :)

I'm not following Kyle's moods. lol

First Kyle and Brennan have sex. That's two-and-a-half weeks ago. Since that time Kyle hasn't touched Brennan or even talked to him about what was bothering him. Brennan thought Kyle was going to break up with him when all it was was something that had to do with sex.

Then, after the nice night they spent at his house, Kyle doesn't talk to Brennan on the way to school and then he tells him that he shouldn't come over to his house for awhile. WTF?

Then at lunch he's nice and sweet.

Moody much? lol I think he's PMS'ing. :)

And Brennan!!! Shame on him for not calling and/or texting his mother to tell her he's staying over Kyle's. And on a school night! And why didn't his mother call/text him to find out where he was?

Ok, on to chapter three. :)

I'm surprised that Ryan went along with the phone sex. He's seems too shy for that, especially with someone he just met/kissed/agreed to go out with. lol

And Morgan - no condom, no lube? And he's so romantic! What did he say, he takes his fingers and sticks his dick in? Something like that. Such a romantic. lol Again, no lube? Ryan's a virgin fer crissakes! haha

I have a feeling Ryan's going to fall for Morgan and Morgan is going to dump him like a hot potato. I hope that doesn't happen though; Ryan seems so sweet and innocent.

im really liking morgan now. would love a description of how he looks though. and it was pretty hot that they had phone sex.

really liking the beginning and im hoping morgan is a bigger hottie than brennan. hurry up with ch. 2.