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oh, god how terrible, their queen is a psyco sadistic bitch.
I'd rather off my self then work under the rule of lunatics....man why can't they all be like Avamay?

Gods you are an amazing fucking writer! I promise when I read each new chapter im always thinking theres NO WAY the last chapter can be topped and THEN by the end im like OH SHIT...or DAAAMN! And then it kills me to have to wait for an update! But I think thats what makes this one of the great ones...where it pisses you off because you have to wait...but you know no matter what you WILL wait just to find out what happens next! So please keep up the amazing work and dont rush it...just keep doing what your doing because thats what keeps me coming back. The detail you give of this world you have created is stunning to say the least. I can picture everything perfectly because of the way you write it. So thank you for sharing your talent with us :),

Interesting revelation about the wolves. I 'm really curious about what their queen is up to, and I hope Tilain will find out. Although right now it doens't look she's going to find out anything apart from the notion she shouldn't defy Rygal. She makes me facepalm quite often, but of course I still like her.

wonderful, simply wonderful! A lovely feast for my mind for thanksgiving!

da fuck, seems like she's gonna fall for him pretty soon. playing games and thinking yourself a great 'player' always backfires on you.
I do look forward to their next 'bed scene'

When Rygal said his kind 'lived longer' you almost gave me a heart attack, fearing to stumble across the 'v' word. Thank the gods he said FAE! I can totally live with that! Though I hope my professionally deformed brain will soon stop translating that word to fatty acid esters, just like my geeky brain had to overcome reading Rygal as Rygel and picture a Hynerian Dominar.
But about the chapter, I’m almost sorry he ‘repaired’ her brain and sealed it. I liked the possibility of him poking around in it. But I guess he’s still able to manipulate her physically, which is nice as well. I’m surprised that queens are ‘something different’ and I wonder if we’ll get to see Rygal’s queen again soon, and I too wonder what he is to her, and vice versa.

I liked Rygal's explenation that he didn't choose her because she was 'special' like she was hoping. I'm curious about what his life is like and what he has in store for tilain.

Oh my goodness! I dont know what to think. I know Tilain is doing this for Avamay buuuuut im kinda liking Rygal. Gotta admit they have some great chemistry...not to mention he saved her life. Im anxious to see how the whole slave thing works out for them. It sounds like he wants her as arm candy:) this is such a great story...I cant wait to see how it all plays out and what will happen after she tells Rygal what they did to her at the temple. And i know Demorak is her mentor or whatever but it still bothers me how he let the stuff happen to her that he did...and i know he couldnt really do anything about it but it still bothers me. Update soooooooooon please!

Okay, I caught up now! I’m almost sorry that I did, because now I have to wait for an update. But yay, the next time will be fun time with Tilain and her favourite jackass! You were right at the end of chapter 26 saying she needed to get laid, but at that time she was being circled by wolves, so I’ll admit I cocked an eyebrow and went to check on your summary to check if I missed the ‘beast’ warning, lol. Well Rygal is kind of close to a monster, but easier on the eyes. Tilain clearly can’t get enough of him no matter what he’ll do to her, and now the man even seems prepared to take her in as a pet. He cares about her too, I really didn’t notice that before, but I also wouldn’t have guessed he’d be some other queen’s obedient pawn. So, for a girl who’s kingdom is in great peril, I’d say Tilain pretty much has everything she wants right there. I liked how Rygel used magic before to get her off, and the mind probing sequence during her previous capture was really interesting too. I wonder if he’ll put his abilities to use again, It seems the possibilities of his kind's magic are endless.

I am also curious about the agenda of this new queen, why she chose to act now and what she wishes to accomplish and if she even can be stopped if she and all of her servants can use magic like that. I hope Tilain will eventually get out of her restraints and find out about her ancestry and what she is exactly, but right now I can’t see how she’ll be able to escape … Anyway I’ll be eagerly looking forward for updates.

Holy shit, this story is amazing! I only read up to chapter 16 and it's killing me that I can't read on right now. I like the flow, I like your story telling and the characters are have substantial depth, even the minor ones. I like your heroine, even though she's making very questionable choices I sympathize with her. She's quite foolish and self destructive at this point though, and I sense she's still underestimating this Rygal character. He's some scary guy alright, and I wonder if the queen will even be able to handle him as his magic is so strong. I'm happy that Demorak 'happened' I like the character, loved their sparring session and her yearning for him. I wonder what she'll do about that. I very much enjoyed Tilain's creepiness sneaking up on her friends having an intimate moment, your comment on it cracked me up. I very much like Haremail and Icai as well, and the way they met, and their virility, lol