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for The Queen's Ambassador

by nifflheim

person Mona Thompson
schedule August 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I have missed you! What an amazing update! I know Demorak was NOT expecting her to stand up to him but she belongs to Rygal now...for now anyway. Im curious how Avamay is going to react when she finds out how Tilain has been "compromised". Maybe she will understand...maybe she wont. And I think a showdown between the 2 Queens with their awesome wings and magic would be fucking unforgettable! Cant wait for an update!♥
person amothepirate
schedule June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Great update!! I am glad that you are okay--and yeah depression medication can sort of make everything a fuzz; tapering that stuff is important though, if you stop it all at once there are some impressively nasty side effects.

Anyways, glad to see you updated again!Looking forward to the next chapter! (Can you believe there are 41 already??)

-Amy
person lundbera
schedule May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
We missed you!!! I am loving this chapter--great job!! Can't wait to read the next one. I hope you are okay!
person Foxx
schedule April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my all time favourite stories. I do hope you're able to update soon!
person yblue
schedule April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hope you get well soon. I know car crashes are deadly, I lost a good friend to one of those two years ago. So I'm glad you survived. Take your time getting better. I'll just hang around a bit while waiting for updates.
person Yblue
schedule February 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, are Tilain’s loyalties shifting a little there? That’ll make the imminent confrontation with her former life and lovers even more interesting. I’m intrigued by this new Kioch character, and I wonder what part he’ll play, and what he’s supposed to find. Surely the ending of last chapter really cracked me up.
Oh and you should check the numbers of your chapters, you went from 38 to 40.
person Candace
schedule January 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! Can't wait for the next update :D :D
person Yblue
schedule January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I believe Maynem needed to be shown his place about as much as Tilain did. And she was probably right about Rygal seeing a side of her she herself did not. I hope to find an update shortly. I can’t wait to read on.
person Yblue
schedule January 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like how the dynamic between Tilain and Rygal seems to change continuously. At this point I think it is fairly clear what Tilain’s character is like and how she’ll react in certain situations. Rygal however I couldn’t seem to understand at all. Sometimes he’s horribly cruel, and sometimes he’s gentle and considerate. With this chapter I finally sense we’re getting the whole picture. The man is intelligent, powerful, resourceful and cunning (and a jackass), we got that. But he’s also weary, and frustrated beyond measure. I think we finally got to the real reason why he came to spy in the human city. He went to seek aid. In retrospect that kind of makes me laugh. How lucky for him that he found Tilain! I wonder how he’d have procured all this information without her. And now they're going to defy the queen! Excellent. I can’t wait to see how that turns out.
I hope this year will be a good one for you with minimal bad stuff and lots of time and inspiration.
person Yblue
schedule December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn i can't wait to read on. Apparently it pays off to be tortures sometimes. It looks like tilain got a lot of new information because of it. The situation seems quitte volatile between the queen, rygal and the wolves, and i wonder if tilain will ever get out of there to get back to avamay. But the immediate question of course would be, what lies within the void? I hope to find an update soon...