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Great story! Keep it up! I started reading and I couldn't stop. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

the story is getting intense! I cant wait to find out who killed the wolves and why... I am especially curious to discover if this bitchy queen has an allegiance with the formors. Great story, keep it up!

You, green-tea, have a delectably twisted way with words. I have been actively lurking on AFF since 2005, but I've only just found your works yesterday and could scarcely tear myself away until I had thoroughly consumed them--I was then compelled to register and leave you this review. Letters to an Incubus was a deliciously smutty read that I'll likely return to for a buzz every now and then, but I can understand your decision in abandoning it in favor of The Queen's Ambassador. This latter piece of fiction had me awake until six in the morning just catching up to your latest chapter. Both the characters and storyline prove to be better fleshed out and more intricately woven. Though I noticed the frequency of carnal activities have been dialed down some, the excerpts remain delightfully salacious much to my pleasure. I am particularly drawn to the elements of BDSM, being a submissive myself. The accuracy of your descriptions on that front can not be overlooked, and I thank you for having a strong command of the written word and being able to translate the physical/psychological feel so precisely as if I were to experience it myself. In any case, I am nearly wringing my hands in nervous anticipation with the way your last chapter ended. I was taken aback as I did not foresee the deaths of both Apps and Maynen, but I also did not expect anything less from Rygal with his composure upon seeing their corpses...somehow, this only proves to escalate the dread of what he and Tilain will face now that they've returned to the castle. I shall eagerly await to see what you have in store for them.

well. That's horrifying. Super happy you updated again though!!

Godsdamned this would make one hell of a movie...I am for reals! The longer it goes on...the better it gets! If thats even possible! Oh! And the under water dicking down they had was so fucking sexy! Im scared to see whats in the castle when they get in there...EEK! ♥

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oh, no.
what now?

This is a great story. You are an amazing storyteller and writer. I look forward to reading all your chapters through to its conclusion.
Thanks again for writing it.

I must say, the way you've developed the characters and the world they live in (what with it's mysteries, ideologies, and subtle nuances) is truly admirable. Especially the characters tho....in a story where characters have to (and sometimes choose to) undergo an extreme degree of violence and are constantly put in positions where they have to make very extreme descisions, it's kind of crucial that we as the readers have a clear understanding of who the characters are and how they think, what their weaknesses r, and where their morals (or lack thereof) and motives and loyalties lie b/c without that things can kind of get out of control and verge on being unrealistic for the world you've created. Your characterization and development is truly impressive. The world u built is so clear and the characters so defined, and it's helped to ground the story even amidst all of the questionable or arguably unpleasant aspects...in a way that isn't heavy handed or dependent on forcing the readers to lean a way that is unnatural.

I'm not sure if I'm making sense,but in sum I just felt that I couldn't keep reading without telling you how freaking amazing this story is! You've created a complex story with harsh themes, dark edges, and plenty of fantasy while maintaining a certain Integrity and realism to it all. I honestly am dreading getting to the end of this fic.lol :)

So glad you're feeling better!!! Absolutely love this story and just waiting for Rygal to blow his top in frustration at our leading lady. She's a crafty one that Tilan.

Yay!! I am glad you updated and are feeling like you have more energy :D looking forward to the next update!