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for A Touch of Winter

by HappyHarvests

person snowleopard
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I already don't like these new changes at the Manor and think they are going to be causing a rift between Kore and Deyja. I am really not too trusting of Deyja's new Groom, Mite, either.... he better not do anything to get Kore in trouble with Deyja but I bet he already has a secret crush on Deyja and wants Kore out of the way.
person Jayden
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I sense there is going to be trouble on the horizon and a troubled road ahead for Kore and Deyja. I hope they can ride this storm out together and not let it break them apart not after all they have been through together.

person adropofink
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am almost afraid to read on knowing how your mind works.....you are going to put Deyja and Kore through a whole lot of "****" aren't you? However that is what makes your stories so appealing, as long as you give us a happily ever after (and baby makes three)!
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Me again. All I have to say is this is brilliant. Something about Mite does not sit well with me. If he tries to get in Kore's way and steal his man I swear I will come and put up a rant in these comments =P It seems like more bad things are bound to happen now for Kore with all these new rules that separate him further from Deyja. I hope they make it out alright
person KiiKii
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am afraid the first words out of my mouth would have been. "Have you touched him?" Not all that other jabber. I would have been more pissed about the idea of my husband sleeping with Mite or that Mite might aid in my husbands sexual needs. I think Kore is a fool for not asking such a question cus I don't trust Mite. Anyone that close to Deyja might be a concern... Everyone has a motive and if anything in the previous story has warned us its that no one is monogamous and society has odd rules.
person adropofink
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you took the time to develop your storyline and characters in PoS. We get to know and love them, laugh and cry with them and I find I prefer stories where the main characters don't meet and fall in love all in the same week. So now that I am truly invested in Kore and Deyja, and happily yes a baby too, I cannot wait to read what you have in store for this beloved couple. Thanks for this sequel.
person Armyofone
schedule July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading every word of PoS, fallen in love with Deyja and Kore and now to have a sequel is beyond happiness. Hope this one will end with an exclamation point, if you know what I mean. PoS left me hungering for more so thank you for giving us more awesomeness.
person Roninn
schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe my eyes, you actually started a sequel, you awesome author you, thank you.
person Casper
schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! You have made my world rock! It's great seeing the boys again and that they will be expecting a child at some point in story makes me so happy for them. Although, knowing how you like to play with these guys I have an itchy feeling things could get a little rough for them and that their current peaceful little existence is going to explode in fireworks.

Great start!
person Nbsiren
schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more :)