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for A Touch of Winter

by HappyHarvests

person Katniss Everdeen
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I sure as hell don't blame Kore for confronting Deyja about suspecting him of sleeping with Mite! I don't trust that little rat and am afraid he is going to try and split them up. Why was Mite selected as Deyja's groom, no, his companion? Did Deyja hand pick him or did one of his brothers? I think he will be a new threat to Kore and that he wants Deyja for himself. I love Byart so am happy he seems to be having a larger role in this sequel. I see him and Kore as brothers. I am enjoying this sequel to PoS very very much.
person Jayden
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that Mite has got to go and he better leave Kore alone or I will bop him on the head with a wet soapy mop!

I think it's a great idea of Kore's asking for his own groom and that he selected Byart who will watch his back and keep him safe. At least now, he won't be alone and have a friend to talk with.


person snowleopard
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, I still have no clue who made a small cameo appearance in previous chapter unless it was the stable boy that brought Deyja his horse.

I am so happy Byart will be Kore's 'groom' because he really needs a friend by his side and I still don't like Mite!

person afan
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am going to have faith in Deyja. Kore and Deyja have been through so much, they will weather whatever comes their way and come through it together with their love intact.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really would hate to see Deyja hurt and betray Kore by sleeping with someone else even if he believes it's for the greater good of his kingdom. They both have faced too many challenges together already, and even fought/faced death, for something like that to spoil their love for each other. I don't know and am probably just jumping the gun by worrying over this worse case scenario that hasn't even happened yet and hopefully never will. If it does happen, I would feel betrayed by Deyja too.

I felt really bad for Kore having to face all these new changes at once.

See you Friday (I hope) for next update!

person Anon
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I think there will be a lot of angst with this sequel so I better get the hankies out.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I swear if Deyja even touches or thinks of Mite in any way other than a servant or sees him as attractive, I will castrate him and flay Mite alive while he watches! I know Mite is Deyja's personal attendant but HANDS OFF BUDDY!!! Deyja is taken!!!!!! Oh, and Deyja just thinks Kore is pleasant to look at! I wonder how he see Mite, more 'pleasant' to look at than his consort?! I don't like all these new rules and changes. If Deyja cheats on Kore, I will hate him even if it's because of the so called new rules! Come on Deyja! Grow a spine! Be a man! Be a King of your own making with your beloved consort at your side helping guide you on the right path and not be dictated to by your brothers.

If Deyja sleeps with Mite, I really think I will throw a temper tantrum and it won't be pretty!
person Nbsiren
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
o.O separate rooms? pressures of society?...I never thought Deyja would spout that crap after everything they've been through to be together
person jusme
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
One of the reasons this story is such a draw for me is the love between Kore and Deyja, only one unto each other, no third party please. I know Deyja will come through this with love for Kore intact (please?) and a child to cement that bond even stronger. No excuses for cheating EVER!!
person Casper
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well damn, separate bedrooms, this ain't good. Deyja better not cheat on Kore, dang it, or I will strangle that little weasel of a groom unless Kore beats me to it.