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for A Touch of Winter

by HappyHarvests

person Casper
schedule August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, damn, what a note to end a chapter with.

So, Kore has been planning to have a conversation with Deyja for months but wasn't prepared for it. Well, that should teach him not to wait next time.

I think Deyja might go into shock when he hears the news and wonder if he will faint, lol.

person Jayden
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Deyja treats Kore like a child sometimes instead of an adult or as his equal. I am very excited that we will be finding out soon how Kore and Deyja can become parents. I bet Heill won't be happy about it.
person afan
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes I get a little disappointed at how Deyja treats Kore, even though deep down I know he loves Kore. Kore is always supportive and gives so much of himself to accommodate his husband but I do enjoy it when Kore stands his ground. Hopefully Deyja will realize he needs to not worry so much about rules and protocols and just treasure his life with Kore. And now on to the exciting upcoming baby chapters....can't wait.
person snowleopard
schedule August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I am so angry with Heill and wish that Kore started a food fight so a pie or something could land on his drunk face.

Cliffhanger!!!!

So, Kore knows he can get pregnant? Very excited now because this will be the best part to learn the details of how it can happen and how Deyja will react to the news. Never mind that, think of what Heill and his Queen will think! Oh, think of the fun with Deyja rubbing it in his arrogant brother's face that his consort can give birth but not the frigid bitch of Marsala, ha ha.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule August 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am very proud of Kore for telling Deyja off even though I hate to see them fight like that. I wish Deyja would get rid of Mite and find another groom who is less threatening to Kore. I think Kore should start carrying his bow and arrows around with him for protection against Mite.
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Don't like it when Kore and Deyja fight...saddens me.......
person jusme
schedule August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't help but wonder if Mite is a spy or someone sent to break Deyja and Kore up....by Kore's father, maybe, Deyja's brothers, maybe but unlikely but who knows....just loving this sequel to pieces!
person Casper
schedule August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with reviewer, jusme, and wouldn't put it past Kore's father or Deyja's brothers to plant someone like Mite in their midst to break them up. It's a pretty dirty thing to do but yup it's possible.

I panicked when Mite drew a blade on Kore, my damned heart is still racing! Deyja should have told Mite he was replacing him after that nasty stunt. I dread to think what could have happened if Deyja wasn't there at the time.




person Anon
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kore, I know you will stand tall and strong like you always do...hang in there and trust in your love with Deyja. Playing politics can be tough but I am sure Deyja will ultimately do the right thing.
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ugh I'm sorry I really just want to slap Mite. I know he can't be good news and I just know he's going to try and get in the way of Kore's relationship. If he sleeps with Deyja so help me I will smite him where he stands =P Maybe he will even try to assassinate Kore I mean he did hold a knife to him when he obviously knew who it was. This is getting so good keep up the great work