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for A Touch of Winter

by HappyHarvests

person afan
schedule October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, sweet way to end the chapter, a bit low-keyed the way Deyja accepted Kore's pregnancy but I am happy everything is out in the open. Cannot wait for more.
schedule October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yayayaya I'm so glad that you're back! It made me happy to hear that you enjoyed your vacation. You deserved some time off. I'm so excited that Kore is with child though I'm sure this means that there's a lot of craziness to come.
person snowleopard
schedule October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back from your trip!!!!! I am glad you had a good time but sad and worried that you are sick. Take care of yourself and feel better soon!!!!

Well, it's about time Deyja figured out Kore was pregnant. I was worried Kore would go into labor before he knew about it!

Thanks for posting this chapter!



person CelticThunderFan
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
They have already created a child so why is Kore telling Deyja this "To create this child, I need your energy, your life force, your vitality."
Apparently, he's already taken what he needed from Deyja with him knowing.

person Jayden
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Kore is driving me crazy by not telling Deyja he is with child. I think the attack has something to do with it but just wish he would tell him already!

See you in three weeks you lucky girl! Have fun in Germany!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think Kore and Deyja should be more open with each other. Deyja has been waiting for Kore to get pregnant so why the delay with Kore telling him? I think Kore is afraid now that he's pregnant but should trust in Deyja to keep him and their unborn baby safe.

Have a safe trip and see you in three weeks!
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Man, I don't think I can wait for over three weeks for the next chapter. But at the same time, three weeks in Germany? That sounds so exciting, I'm envious! Have a great time!
person lolita
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
“Are your hands broken, my love?”
hahahah i love it
person jusme
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
For two people who adore each other, I am baffled by Kore's hesitancy in telling Deyja everything he truly feels which leads Deyja to misunderstand him and vice versa. I am sure when Kore eventually comes around and tells Deyja he is carrying their baby, everything else will seem unimportant and they will focus on their baby and their love for each other.
person snowleopard
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Why didn't Kore tell Deyja he's pregnant? What's he waiting for? Come on Kore, stop putting it off!!!

Well, I am glad we learned what happened to Kore and Byart and it wasn't as bad as I thought it was. I think Deyja should have listened more to what the rebel said; "Shows how much you actually know about your people and their suffering."

Will you be updating once more before you leave on your trip?