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August 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh~ So now I wonder if Alec is Matius' brother? Very interesting tid bit! I felt bad for Abby, because I was also laughing (at her) with them at the end. Even though I don't know what's going on either. XD
I cannot overstate how much I love Matius' power plays. (Both sexually and as a captain!) I think it's because each time she gets into that mood, she's never quite the same as before. She handles things differently each time, and that really matters when something new 'challenges' her.
And I loved Abby's new delight for sex, lol! She sure hopped on board fast! (Get it?! It's like another pirate pun that...sucks. :0 )
Looking forward to seeing where that carriage is taking them, hun~
I cannot overstate how much I love Matius' power plays. (Both sexually and as a captain!) I think it's because each time she gets into that mood, she's never quite the same as before. She handles things differently each time, and that really matters when something new 'challenges' her.
And I loved Abby's new delight for sex, lol! She sure hopped on board fast! (Get it?! It's like another pirate pun that...sucks. :0 )
Looking forward to seeing where that carriage is taking them, hun~
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! If there is one concept I've always loved seeing/using, it's contrasting a powerful, commanding character against their lover and everyone else, lol. Matius' stern reminder was epic, and I am definitely looking forward to seeing how Abby tolerates her future behavior. Also...the two handed glass holding was very cute. I love Abby! <3
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July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is such a nice read! I've never indulged in pirate-based stories before, so it was a new flavor in genre too. I really love both Abby and Matius, and their chemistry is superb~ (Also love Matius' design; red lips, long hair, and a thing for control? = YUS PLEASE!)
Your style is to the point, without leaving a sense of underdevelopment, allowing for all the good bits to come with proper build up. I really enjoy this--looking forward to chapter 7 and beyond~
Don't feel sad with the low response rate, hun. F/F stuff is often overlooked here, as well as under contributed to. It's unfortunate, but I appreciate this work being posted despite that~ Good luck! And if things get sketchy, have an ale. Harr! (Or is it rum. I think it's supposed to be rum...)
Your style is to the point, without leaving a sense of underdevelopment, allowing for all the good bits to come with proper build up. I really enjoy this--looking forward to chapter 7 and beyond~
Don't feel sad with the low response rate, hun. F/F stuff is often overlooked here, as well as under contributed to. It's unfortunate, but I appreciate this work being posted despite that~ Good luck! And if things get sketchy, have an ale. Harr! (Or is it rum. I think it's supposed to be rum...)
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July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story so far. Especially now that things are starting to get a little saucy!
But seriously, sexually confident and dominating female pirates over other female pirates has got to be one of my biggest kinks. Please continue writing this story!
But seriously, sexually confident and dominating female pirates over other female pirates has got to be one of my biggest kinks. Please continue writing this story!