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for Eithos

by MonochromaticMadHatter

person staar
schedule October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back !!!!!! missed you....too many people and me thinks my eithos will come to harm with them, hope not!!!!
person Moku_Sui
schedule October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're updating again! This post made my day! I think I'm a little overwhelmed by the number of new characters all of sudden, but I'm looking forward to finding out more about these characters.
person cheesekun
schedule October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I hope Pyry doesn't leave his eithos! At the same time, Pyry doesn't even know how long eithos live for (he grew so quickly, too...) and if he chooses to stay in the Amazon and the eithos dies in a few years... he'd be stranded alone and helpless...! Can't wait to see what happens next :D
person cheesekun
schedule October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can kind of see the eithos becoming less tolerant of others on his territory, but I wonder what this is going to mean for Pyry... The rescue really took me by surprise and I can't wait to see what Pyry's colleagues think of the eithos! I hope all goes well with your trip :D Keep safe :)
person cheesekun
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really curious about whether Pyry was the only survivor... Loved this chapter btw :D
person cheesekun
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
He he - i do wonder what the badger alien looks like, actually... and it seems like the eithos has a badger pelt...I wonder if it's some coming of age ceremony...
person cheesekun
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Interested about the eithos' development and marking his territory. Wonder if other humans are the reason the eithos is marking his territory, rather than another eithos...
person cheesekun
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the way things are going :D
person cheesekun
schedule October 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! How will they get out of this one?! I love how Pyry is coming to accept the eithos as a sentient species; I like how he says it with his actions and thoughts, and doesn't need to constantly remind himself that the eithos isn't an animal :D You're a great writer! Looking forward to more :)
person cheesekun
schedule October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved the idea of a burrow, but I wonder what the eithos is hiding from?