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for Eithos

by MonochromaticMadHatter

person fri
schedule October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My goodness this is good. Haven't been sucked into a story in one go in such a long ass time. This reads so naturally to me, you're amazing. Keep it up! Can't wait for the update :D
person Moonberry
schedule October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Huge fan of the story and I look forward to the next update.

Still... Sort of wish the " Eithos" had a name it sound so offensive to call someone Eithos after you have known them not only for months but slept with him. I do not like referring to him as Eithos because I feel he deserves a name. In my mind its like referring to someone as " it" .
Lol I so want the off the ship and want a happy ending. The Eithos when you think about it has given/sacrificed so much. He does not deserve to be treated like an unintelligent animal especially when the iq test has priced otherwise. I miss the serenity the experienced most of the time while off the ship and the strengthening of their relationship.
person Moku_Sui
schedule October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
gerr...that they wanted to put him in containment pisses me off...
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for a great chapter as usual! :D
Personally I like the new characters, but whatever. I was cringing with secondhand embarrassment when anybody seemed to be catching on to the real nature of Pyry's relationship with the Eithos LOL. But I guess it will probably be ok since we're talking about a society that apparently is fairly ok with interspecies relationships and once they've accepted the eithos is really human like it won't be as freaky?
The nanomachines are a cool idea.


person cheesekun
schedule October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! :D Really curious about the 'nano-machine incident' that happened to Pyry... So I guess at least Terrance and the Dr could guess about Pyry's correct relationship with his eithos :) I woner if Terrance could help the eithos learn language...? Looking forward to Wednesday :D
person Nbsiren
schedule October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
mmmm, I can see why the Eithos is skittish.
person Housewolf
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm excited about the new characters, but also nervous. If they start treating the eithos like a guinea pig, or treating Pyry poorly because he's involved with the eithos, I'mma have to go into this fictional world and kick some tail. I love those two and I just want them to be safe. ;_;
person Moku_Sui
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. I can't wait to see how the new characters react when they find out the real relationship between Pyry and the eithos
person kbird
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yay you're back!!!!! Very excited about the continuation of this story111
person sabaku_lotus
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I'm glad that you continue to write this too! It's still one of the more original stories on the site without a lot of wham bam or rape.