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I've waited for this!

That's actually a nice development. Still, I'm not sure if Ael fully understands what he's getting into.

Oh good to hear you're back to this story and all. I know all about depression and the things dealing with that entails; besides which I had some time to catch up on a sudden influx of story writing and updates that swamped my inbox. ^.^

As for this story, I only noticed one thing that I read 3 times before I realized just why it didn't look right. The sentence when Pyry and Ael get to the hall where the meeting room is and they stretch, you have "...Pyry stretched out his arms because he could, and laughing Ael did too." *Not the exact line since it's difficult for me to highlight things on my Surface.* IMHO, I believe you meant Ael (the eithos' name is spelled correctly?) stretched and Pyry laughed because Ael's "laugh" has been mostly noises. If I'm mistaken, I apologize, but that's what I got from it.

Keep up the good work, and now I have a reason to look forward to Wednesday nights.

Leania

I simply had to review ...
This chapter for some reason was horrible. I cannot imagine them both living on Mars happily for a number of reasons. Even with a garden Pyry has to realize how unfair this decision is. i also did not like reading how Pyry was so thrilled to go back to Mars and did not at all confirm what sort of experiments Ael would be put through or generally his over well- being. Pyrys personally this chapter seemed drastically different he came across as cold and not really caring.

Ireyon,

I agree their no way Ael fully understands what he's the situation and what's at stake. Pyry and the doctor it seems are only concerned with their well-being. Ael is willing to give up so much and Pyry was cold when he was talking to Ael about the situation. It was like Pyry had already decided he was going back and Mars and could care less if Pyry stayed or went to Mars with him.

When your schedule allows, please update this story!

Love the name! I wonder if it means anything specific to the eithos (native language maybe)?

Nice chapter. I like where this is going. I'm still a bit worried what will haben when Ael is a full adult though.

Hey there stranger!!! Im so happy you are back! I love his name and I love that he picked it:) SO cute. I really love the words you use to describe the sounds that Ael makes according to his moods or reactions. I think warbled is my fav...I can totally hear the sound w hen you say that. I am really excited to have an update finally but I understand shit happens! Im so scared something bad is going to happen to Ael or Pyry. Or some sneaky fucker is going to try to take the eithos to studt or something as equally evil as that. Or cause Ael to have to defend himself and act like he attacked for no reason. UGH!! I cant wait! So im happy you are back and take all the time you need but Pleeeeeeeeeeease promise me you wont outright abandon this story! Its way to good...your way too talented and im way to invested! Thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

P.S. I absolutely looooovvvved the mani-pedi scene! So cute and a clever idea! It also makes total sense that trimming them would make him feel better...not to mention make for some smooth lovey scenes between Pyry and his Ael! It also shows how attentive Pyry is to Ael's needs in this new strange surrounding his alien lover is in just so he can be with Pyry. So sweet how they are with eachother:)

The name is unique :)