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for Eithos

by MonochromaticMadHatter

person Moku_Sui
schedule February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this chapter. Can't wait for the next!
person Lavi1443
schedule February 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omygod i cant describe how much i like this story
Ael is just adorable
You have written an original science fiction so interesting that i find myself actually having theories about the world you have created while reading it.
Awesome job, im sooo going to follow the updates from now on ;)
person Leania07
schedule February 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like that Pyry has a firm backbone against H'ay. People's opinion's change and Pyry did take a while to warm up to Ael. Plot twist coming, hmm? Oh boy...though it makes me wonder. Eithos' as adult get more aggressive, and yet Pyry seems to be a bit more firm than before; does this have any connection, or is that part of Pyry we haven't seen yet? Don't leave the options as we'll either hate the twist or be neutral; what if we like it? Oh wait...great now I've got so many things floating through my head as 'what if'. Oh :P on you, LOL. Just teasing, ^.^
Keep up the good work!
Leania
person romancelover
schedule January 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i think Ael is a nice name and im glad he named himself.
person Nbsiren
schedule January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to guess where you'll take this~
person Moku_Sui
schedule January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter, but I'm worried about Ael's aggression...
person icassop
schedule January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! So happy to see a new update =)
I'm really excited about the coming chapters. Also, still curious about why Pyry doesn't want to be healed.

Thank you so much!
Please do take care of yourself first. If necessary, the story can wait.
I wish you all the best and hopefully, see you next time =)
person diana
schedule January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Updates! I thought this would be another story that's been dropped. Thank you for continuing it!
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thanks for updating!!!! You made my boring day very awesome!!!!!

I wonder who the jerk was who was bothering Pyry and hope that Awl doesn't get in trouble because of him. I was worried that you would never update again like has happened to so many other stories here lately with authors mysteriously disappearing. I am so happy you were not abducted by aliens who could have been doing very horrible experiments on you so relived you are back.
person Igs
schedule January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was kind of exciting. So many new an interesting things happened! I'm glad your feeling a bit better!