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Great update! Am already waiting to read the next chapter ;)

So glad to see Ael back on the scene again. I was definitely thrown for a loop with the Stephan fallout. I really thought he was a good guy as much as a scientist could be. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

omg...Was that...was that a tear in my eye??? This chapter tugged at my heart...TT

Oh my god stefan is a huge foreskin! He just steams my carrots i hope he falls and twists his ankle in the next chapter

I just recently came across this story, and wanted to say how thoroughly I have been enjoying it! This piece is expertly crafted, and each new chapter has consistently impressed me with the care and commitment you've put into them. Your characters are vibrant and complex, and their interactions feel fluid and not forced. Ael and the eithos species are unique and fascinating, and the detail you've put into their creation really brings life into them. Makes me wish I could have my very own eithos!

A question for you; and I apologize if this is something that has been dealt with in a previous review, as I haven't had the time to peruse them; but do you have a conclusion in mind for this story? Sometimes with lengthy pieces, if you don't have an ending in mind, it can bog down and become muddled. I've found with my own writing that the more limits I place on myself, what I write tends to be tighter and feel fresher. Finding a stopping point gives you a time limit, and helps build drama and tension. So I am simply curious what plans you have for this awesome story!

TL;DR: Fabulous work, looking forward to reading more!

WELL
That was both expected and at the same time completely unexpected but I love it! I cant wait to see where you take it next!

I knew something was off, but was not expecting this. I think Pyry's reaction was perfectly warranted for the situation. I don't think, so far, that this is a drastic different side of Pyry, it really makes sense considering what he found out. And we never saw Pyry before being stranded, so there isn't as much of a change that we can see, it really only was shown with H'ays reaction to him.

D:
How horrible! But this does seem like a good time to bring in more eithos as characters. Will that happen or is Ael the only eithos character we'll see?

:( This makes me so sad...

Oh noooooooooooo!!! :( Pyry and Ael's little love nest was too good to be true.
I wonder what they can even do now. Can Ael communicate with the other eithos? Warn them or publicize that they can talk/reason somehow?
Great chapter as always.