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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
awwww it's turning into their home sweet home :P
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
If I got stranded on an alien planet like Pyry, I wish to handle it as well as him. He's really awesome <3
This chapter was a little longer, right? I do like that :3
When... oh dear... The Eithos still hasn't got a name yet huh? Hope he get's one soon :) Anyway, when he started scent-marking, I thought it was because he was getting older, more mature and beginn to claim stuff. He sure claimed Pyry ;) Then you gave it a much darker spin. Very interesting! Can't wait till next update!
This chapter was a little longer, right? I do like that :3
When... oh dear... The Eithos still hasn't got a name yet huh? Hope he get's one soon :) Anyway, when he started scent-marking, I thought it was because he was getting older, more mature and beginn to claim stuff. He sure claimed Pyry ;) Then you gave it a much darker spin. Very interesting! Can't wait till next update!
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, that’s nice. Here I write a nice long review and AFF just gobbles it all up. How sweet…
What I was trying to say was that I really admire Pyry. He’s got such a good handle on things. Sure, he’s scared at times, but he keeps trying and he doesn’t give up. He’s also very pro-active with his nets and baskets and what-not. I sure wouldn’t be able to sow my own leg back together. He is one awesome man that one.
Something I’ve been wondering about is, will our Eithos ever get a name? Doesn’t Pyry want something more personal to call him by? I mean, it makes him seem so animalistic when he’s only called by his race’s name.
When the eithos started scent-marking, I thought it was because he was groing up, becoming more mature, and with that, wants to make his claim. He sure claimed Pyry all right ;) Then you went and gave the whole a much darker spin. So now I’m all worried about where he’s off to.
Also, has Pyry given any thought about what would happen if he were to be rescued? Will he go with them and leave his lover behind? Will he uproot the eithos from his natural environment by taking him with him? I’d also love to see Pyry met another survivor on the planet. That would be so interesting. How would they react when seeing what kind of relationship Pyry has with the animalistic eithos? And how would the eithos welcome the new person? The species doesn’t really seem to be that much of pack animals like we humans are. Oh well. That’s just something I’ve been pondering about, ha ha.
Anyway, great story. The world is very spectacular. So are its inhabitants. And I’m also very impressed that you’ve managed to keep the updates coming twice a week. This chapter also seemed to be a bit longer? :) Good work is all I can say :D
What I was trying to say was that I really admire Pyry. He’s got such a good handle on things. Sure, he’s scared at times, but he keeps trying and he doesn’t give up. He’s also very pro-active with his nets and baskets and what-not. I sure wouldn’t be able to sow my own leg back together. He is one awesome man that one.
Something I’ve been wondering about is, will our Eithos ever get a name? Doesn’t Pyry want something more personal to call him by? I mean, it makes him seem so animalistic when he’s only called by his race’s name.
When the eithos started scent-marking, I thought it was because he was groing up, becoming more mature, and with that, wants to make his claim. He sure claimed Pyry all right ;) Then you went and gave the whole a much darker spin. So now I’m all worried about where he’s off to.
Also, has Pyry given any thought about what would happen if he were to be rescued? Will he go with them and leave his lover behind? Will he uproot the eithos from his natural environment by taking him with him? I’d also love to see Pyry met another survivor on the planet. That would be so interesting. How would they react when seeing what kind of relationship Pyry has with the animalistic eithos? And how would the eithos welcome the new person? The species doesn’t really seem to be that much of pack animals like we humans are. Oh well. That’s just something I’ve been pondering about, ha ha.
Anyway, great story. The world is very spectacular. So are its inhabitants. And I’m also very impressed that you’ve managed to keep the updates coming twice a week. This chapter also seemed to be a bit longer? :) Good work is all I can say :D
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September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Does the Eithos have a name I wonder?
Never get bored with this.
Never get bored with this.
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September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Was not expecting sex! Was not off put by sex! Was surprised that it was a loving scene like the rest of the story.
My god I wish this was a book or something I could save and keep on reading for a long time. I mean I can't put it down. I want to re read the whole thing again. Second story that I read on this site on a daily basis.
My god I wish this was a book or something I could save and keep on reading for a long time. I mean I can't put it down. I want to re read the whole thing again. Second story that I read on this site on a daily basis.
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September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
=^.^=
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September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
just read chapter 17 and i must admit that was pretty hot alien sex. was a long wait but i feel it was worth it. well done.
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Y'know, races don't really exist. it's how we explain tones of the same color that changed depending on climate conditions.
So I never really understood the hype about someone being black, arabian, latino or whatever.
I don't see them a s something special.
Not in a bad way or a good way.
It's just same old , plain ole people to me.
But his here in your story...it's nice. Cause eithos being gray...having pale marble white legs around grey body is just so not inviting to the eye.So, you did a good thing there. Makes the scene more alluring to the eye.
So I never really understood the hype about someone being black, arabian, latino or whatever.
I don't see them a s something special.
Not in a bad way or a good way.
It's just same old , plain ole people to me.
But his here in your story...it's nice. Cause eithos being gray...having pale marble white legs around grey body is just so not inviting to the eye.So, you did a good thing there. Makes the scene more alluring to the eye.
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
All righty then that was kinda hot there !! now what's going to happen is he ever going to be found or is he going to say with the ethos for good ...thanks for the update !!!!!!!!!
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually go for this sort of sci-fi story, but the quality if your writing really drew me in.
I am very interested in seeing what happens, if Pyry eventually gets off the planet with the Eithos, or if he ends up staying to be with the Eithos.
A part of me is wondering how well he was able to keep track of time, and if maybe more time has elapsed than he thought.
The Eithos growing larger interests me too, if it's just because he's young, or because he has a partner he needs to protect.
I am very interested in seeing what happens, if Pyry eventually gets off the planet with the Eithos, or if he ends up staying to be with the Eithos.
A part of me is wondering how well he was able to keep track of time, and if maybe more time has elapsed than he thought.
The Eithos growing larger interests me too, if it's just because he's young, or because he has a partner he needs to protect.