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for Eithos

by MonochromaticMadHatter

schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
would be there mpreg? please? :3
person wirevix
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah~ just wanted to say that I am delighted with this story so far. It's fast-paced and playful, and the sex scenes are a delight. The world always needs more good xeno romance stories, so I'm very glad I found this one!
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but I find one thing disturbing, why doesn't the eithos have a name?
person icassop
schedule September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Waah, those two are just utterly adorable >v< I love their domestic scenes.
But I'm also curious what you have in store for the next chapter. I hope it's nothing too horrible .__.

Thank you!
person Moku_Sui
schedule September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Weeeee!!!! Loved this chapter! Although, now I'm nervous about your next chapter...I don't like cliff hangers...
person My_perversities
schedule September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I freaken LOVE this story. I've been following from the start and I must say I wait with bated breath for each chapter and pray for faster updates. Lol. I can honestly say I never know where you will take it next but I love every minute of it. I never miss an update. I can honestly say the only thing I wish would happen is that those lovely nannites along with alien DNA will work to get Pyry pregnant!! Gotta love a good MPreg story that's believable. Keep up the awesome work. You have my full support.
person sabaku_lotus
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck what is they going to fight now? It has to be something bad.
person staar
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well yea he better man up and protect the ethos too!!!!! love it see ya soon and thanks for the update !!!!!!
person SG
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol, the Eithos is marking his territory, maybe he does it , because he thinks Pyry is pregnant. XD (Or maybe Pyry IS actually pregnant? O_o Is this an Mpreg fic? I don't mind either way, but I didn't catch anything in the description.)

The sex scenes are entertaining, but I don't care that much for them to be honest. I'm much more interested in Pyry and the Eithos' interactions; I like how they're learning to understand each other on certain levels.

Furthermore, I'm really curious to know what's going on in that Eithos's head. What is his perspective of everything that happened? How does he feel about Pyry? What is going through his head? We see everything through Pyry's eyes, so, honestly, we don't know; it's a mystery!
person J
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it took me so long to start reading this, and now I don't want to stop! I love love love this. The story is well-paced, and the characters well-written. I can't wait for the next update!