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for Eithos

by MonochromaticMadHatter

person l.fire
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well, well this now is interesting
so, I guess Pyr is going away for a few years, when he returns the eithos will be all grown up ahahaha and ready for marriage.
person staar
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG after all this time now they come NONONONONONO he can't leave him or her hope to see you soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nbsiren
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm in shock...I don't know if I should be happy Pyry has been found or sad because now he has to leave the eithos...
person My_perversities
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! Pyry don't leave!!!! He's not allowed to leave!! I hope he decides to stay with his love. I will have to cry otherwise. I still love this story to pieces. And I'm hoping that the Eithos being so protective and coddling means BABY!! Please keep up the awesome work.
person rukia isaioi
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Coolness!!! I have 2 wonder tho, why pyry hasnt tot eithos mor words & simpl phrases??? Ie: im hungry, im sik, plz, thanx, patrol, hunt, fruit, leeches, food, water, shelter, rain, eithos, predator, human, weaving, basket, sex, body parts, clothes. . . Anyway like the chap, hope it goes well 4 them n the future. Plz update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
No!!!!!!! Pyry was wrong for that.
Love the story.
person sabaku_lotus
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh fuck now I'm afraid what's going to happen next and excited! Nothing is wrong with this story. Nothing. It's just wonderful.
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
chapter 19 is one of my favorite chapters. i love the detailed lovemaking scene and the eithos saying he loves pyry. really good.
person rukia isaioi
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well cool!!! Quik question: could u plz name the eithos?!? I really hope u will cuz it gets boring reading 'the eithos', 'his eithos', & 'pyrys eithos'. Plz update soon!!!
person Nbsiren
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Impending evil cliffie coming up, I can only hope it's a cliffie leading to goodness :P