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for Eithos

by MonochromaticMadHatter

person staar
schedule October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
sorry to see your going though that hope all goes well and you know I'll be waiting for your update !!!! good luck !!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new chapter! Yay, Pyry unbroke the Eithos heart a little!

Adult Eithos change? Hm. I'm guessing Pyry's eithos will just become more territorial maybe? This could be a problem for him trying to take him into human civilization. Poor Pyry really has a dilemma. I think as readers we all love the Eithos and want him to stay with him, but I can see hanging around eating fruit with a single other creature might drive him crazy eventually.
person lovelycrazy
schedule October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. That's a tough question. Maybe because the juvenile eithos are, like most youngsters, more curious and open-minded than their adult counterparts? Or as they age they get more driven by their instincts? Hnn. I don't know. But it would be odd if suddenly pyry's eithos becomes vicious with him. Unless there's some sort of disease afflicting only adult eithos and it makes them extra territorial and behaves in such a vicious manner with non-eithos...? Anyway, i hope you find your footing soon. It'll happen sooner or later. Just BELIEVE!
person icassop
schedule October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that I don't like speculating. I usually want the author to present their ideas without me having any preconceived opinions.
That said, I like the new info and where it's going. It certainly makes for a very exciting development.

I wish you good luck for the next few weeks. Sad to hear that the updates will temporarily stop but I'm hopeful to hear from you in the near future with a new chapter soon. All the best and take care of yourself! =)
person Nbsiren
schedule October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope Pyry and the eithos figure this out.
person rukia isaioi
schedule October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
O my. Eithos adulthood sounds ruff. Poor things, bein lil & seein others go from friendly 2 homicidal. Hopefully it's somethin that can b overcome!!! Mayb he can learn enuf 2 join pyry on the ship/off planet??? I hope so!!! As 4 ur trip: wifi spots!!! Tons of places hav them now, so i hope u can find enuf internet access 2 update at least once n a while. Hope 2 here from u soon,

Rukia
person Donna
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank the gods u released chapter 21 b4 u have to stop dating...I mightv died of anxiety waiting to figure out what kind of rescue it would be. I was so worried for some reason that theyd just snatch pyr, knock him out, leave the planet and ask questions later.
The last bit about adult eithos being dangerous made me snicker. Plot Twist! Lol

Thanks for the update
person KC
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Post the next chapter or chapters when you can. I hope your life issues straighten out and get fixed well and as soon as possible.
schedule September 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg! i feel so sad for the eithos now that the ship has arrived.
person lovelycrazy
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
(Warning: reviewer ranting as if pyry could hear this) Well, that made me feel cold inside, too. Just cold with disbelief and maybe a little bit of anger. I mean, really, pyry? You never once thought that when a search and rescue (/retrieval) party comes your way, it also means leaving behind, oh i don't know, the planet? which also means leaving your Beloved Eithos (and yes, with a capital B) because let's face it, you love the overgrown e.t. lizard as much as he adores you. *huff* for a rocket scientist, you're such a dummy. *tears up* and he was begging you too. Several times. *sniff* Poor eithos. *slaps pyry over the head* you better man up while you're gone, you hear me! Make use of that time to heal your panic attacks. Goodness gracious!